His flaccid cock dangled next to me; shiny with spittle.

The air was warm and humid. I could hear the crickets chirping on the outskirts while the filters of the pool cleansed the water. The security light in the parking lot was bright, yet back here – on the edges of the pool – it was just enough to cast subtle shadows across our bodies. His breathing was slow and gentle. I watched his chest slowly rise and fall; beads of sweat trickled down into his navel where a small pool had formed. A field of sparse dark hair covered his stomach, extending down to his smooth freshly manicured loins - Donny's muscular legs turned outwards.

After a time he said my name.


"Yes," I replied softly

I was relieved at the sound of his voice. The silence between us was becoming awkward and I didn't know what to say to him.

"I think we should go"

GO? Why did he want to leave? Didn't he realize we were having a perfect moment?

"Is there somewhere you need to be?"


I could sense the feeling of awkwardness in his voice. He was becoming uncomfortable. I closed my eyes and prayed that he wasn't going to freak out – but it didn't do any good.

"...no, but I want to go."

"Uh, okay – we can go," I said in a very casual manner.

I did not want to overreact or beg him to lay here with me on the warm concrete, holding each other, or perhaps even mess around again.

As I sat up, Donny was quick to rise and begin walking for the building.

Shit. I got up and ran after him. As he rounded the corner where the diving boards where I asked him to wait.

He stopped, turned around, and looked at the ground.

"Hey... what's the matter?"

He wouldn't look at me or reply.

"Donny, I just want you to know that what we had back there..." I said motioning behind us, "...was incredible."

I reached for his upper arm – he was shivering.

"Hey..." I touched the side of his face, stroking his cheek, pushing his hair over his ear and palming the side of his head, "...what is it?"

"You aren't freaking out by any of that?" he asked

"No... Donny that was amazing."

He reached out and wrapped his arms around me, grasping me tightly. He was breathing much heavier now.

I knew he would freak out – and he did.

I felt him start to huff a little and then I felt his warm tears on my chest.

"Hey, it's okay" I reassured him, and then I felt him squeeze be very tightly – almost like a bear hug. His biceps flexed and shook as he squeezed me.

"Donny... that's enough."

And that's when I felt his fist pound me in the back.



"Donny..." he was still squeezing me and hitting me in the back with a closed fist.


I tried to break free from his grasp, but he was holding on so tightly.

"Donny stop," I pleaded with him.

That's when I put my leg behind his and quickly leaned in so he would lose his balance – he did and stumble backward letting go of me in the process. I reached out and grabbed his arm as he flailed backward. I didn't want him to fall.

He yanked his arm out of my hand, turned, and ran to the main building.

I chased after him, "DONNY WAIT!"

He scooped up his clothes and went in the office door. I chased after him, leaving my clothes and keys on the deck. He was out the front door of the pool before I could stop him, heading towards my car in the parking lot.

My naked ass was chasing after him.

Once there he tried to open the door, but it was locked. The gravel in the lot slowed us both down, but by the time I made it to my car he had managed to get his shorts on.

"What the hell Donny!"

"We shouldn't have done that."

"Donny, it's okay."

"No – it isn't"

"But I thought you wanted to?"

"So did I, but now I don't know!"

"You don't know what?"

"I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO JASON!!!" he screamed at me. I took a step back while he furiously slipped his shirt over his head.

"What is there to do?"

"FUCK! Don't you get it?"

"Get what?"

"JESUS – WHAT WE JUST DID...to...each other!"

"Okay, I really need you to chill out."

He was holding his head with both arms raised in the air, hands on either side of his face, pacing back and forth along the side of my car.

"I can't fucking relax; I just sucked my best friends dick! How can I possibly relax?"

"Because it's okay Donny – it's OH-KAY"

My words started to get through to him and he finally stopped and stood there looking at me with this befuddled look on his face.

Then he smiled – "Really?"

I exhaled deeply, "Yes – really."

He chuckled and then put his hand over his mouth. I chuckled back and reached out for him.

He stepped towards me and we embraced.

"Dude, you are fine."

"I am?"

"Yes, you are fine." I squeezed him even tighter. "And this is all okay..."

"It is? It is... its fine..." he repeated to himself.

I held him until I felt his body relax and then let go. I grasped his face with both hands and looked him in the eye.

He said he was sorry, tears in his eyes, and I wrapped my arms around his neck and pulled him in to me again. It felt good to hold him, his firm body pressed against mine, his vulnerability in this moment was overwhelming – I wanted to consume him. The feeling of his warm hands on my backside felt like fire irons against my flesh.

I wanted him again and when I felt his lips kiss my bare shoulder, he wanted me too.

I stroked his wet head and felt him push against me, turning me towards the side of my car. I stepped back and felt his warm breath on my neck; his tongue moved slowly across my clavicle to my neck and up to my jaw.

"What are you doing" I asked him.

"I don't know"

"...whew, okay I think maybe..."

"Shut up Jason"

And I did.

His tongue traced my jawbone from ear to ear, nipping at each of my earlobes. His hands had moved down to my buttocks, I felt him squeeze and pull me into him.

"...oh God..." I whispered quietly.

He kissed at my neck, moving slowly down the nape until I felt his hot breath against my chest. He kissed me again on my collarbone and moved down further between my pecs, his nose tickling my small patch of chest hair.

His hands slid around my sides and went down my front where he gripped both thighs firmly until I felt his fingernails digging into my skin.

And then he began to kneel down.


His mouth and tongue traced the grooves in my stomach down to my navel where he stopped to slip his tongue in.

"...oh..." I gasped.

He knelt down further until I could feel his hot breath waft across my cock and balls. His arms wrapped around my legs and he tugged at them – asking me to spread them open.


"I want to try this again" he said softly.

I felt his nose and lips press into my bush and kiss me gently. It sent shivers throughout my body. My cock filled and I felt the fabric of Donny's shirt against the tip.

Donny opened his mouth against my abdomen, his breath coursing across my skin. I felt his lips kiss both sides of the hilt. His fingertips caressed my inner thighs as his hands rose up and went flat against my pelvis.

My cock slid along the side of his face, his evening scruff nipping away at the sensitive head, until I felt his lips gently kiss the tip.

Donny didn't say a word.

He grasped the base of my cock with his left hand and with his eyes closed; he opened his mouth and extended his tongue – wide and flat. He moved very slowly as his tongue made contact with the underside of my cockhead. Then I felt his lips gently come down around the top, his head tilted back just a little as he advanced further down my shaft. I slid along the roof of his mouth until my tip touched the back of his throat.

He gently inhaled through his nose, advanced forward, and swallowed me.

I could see his throat expand and felt the tightness engulf me. He was going slowly and it felt phenomenal. All I could do was stand there, my insides ablaze, as Donny took me again.

As he pulled back, his left hand stayed at his lips until he freed my head from his mouth. His grip on my shaft was strong, causing the tip to bulge. A string of saliva glistened in the evening light between his lower lip and the head of my cock. As he began to speak, this string of saliva swung back and forth...

"...that wasn't so hard..." he said. Then he looked up at me with those cobalt blue eyes, "...can I do it again..."

"...uh, sure..." I replied in heavy breath. My hands gripping the side of the car – I was barely able to stand still.

So Donny took me again, although faster this time and it wasn't long before he found his own rhythm and was working the entire length of my dick. He drew on me so hard it felt like my tip was going to come off – I had never been sucked this hard before. And his pulling; I could feel the tug deep inside me at the root – it causes my asshole to pucker each time he pulled on me.

But when Donny's right hand came up between my legs and began probing for my asshole I couldn't help but squat just enough to open up for him.

I gasped when he swiped it with his middle finger, and moaned louder and louder as he pressed his dry finger into my sweaty hole.

My knees started to shake, my breathing was so rapid, and I could feel I was close to coming. Then Donny hooked his middle finger and he hit me right on the g-spot, I bore down and it felt as if my heart was going to explode out of my chest.

"OH FUCK DONNY THATS IT!" My hips started bucking back and forth as he tried to stay on me. My nuts ached for release while he finger fucked me ass, my cock deeply in his throat – I lost control and almost fell to the ground.

I couldn't take it – I felt like I was coming apart!

Donny pulled back off enough so that just the last three inches were in his mouth and then he slipped another finger in my ass.

That's when I came.

And I came HARD!

My ass clamped down on his fingers, his tongue danced on the underside of my cockhead, and I blew a huge load into Donny's mouth.

And he took it – moaning and pulling my seed out of me as I convulsed and shook in front of him.


I was on fire!

I grabbed the hair on Donny's head and dumped everything I had into him until I felt dizzy with pleasure. My knees went and I lean forward on top of him, my stomach spasmed with wave after wave of orgasm – I came down as he fell backward, my body collapsing on top of his in a spent mess. He fingers popped out of my ass – I screamed out and drew my knees to my chest.

Never in my life had I had such an amazing...moment...

I lay there on the pebbled ground, my body continuing to shudder and clench with aftershocks of the massive orgasm Donny had given me.

"Are you okay?" he asked.

"...I just...need...a...minute...okay..."

He lay there on his back next to me, I was on my side. He was looking at me with a huge smile on his face.

It took me a minute but I finally asked what he was smiling about.

"I wanted to see if I could do it – and I did."

"Do what?"

"Make you come that hard" he said with a little laugh.

I chuckled back at him and continued to regain my breath.

"Now I understand why you asked Sara to stick her finger up your ass."

I rolled over on my back, "...you remember that?"

"Well, I was intrigued when you mentioned it that day."

I couldn't believe he had remembered, and for some reason I felt embarrassed and started to laugh out loud. "Oh my god!"

We both laughed as we lay there on the ground until we saw a strobe light move across the side of the pool building.

"Fuck, get up" Donny said in a panic.


"It's the fucking cops!"

"Oh shit!"

We both scurried over to the side of the car and peered through the driver's side window. They were coming in from the other side of the lot with their search light on. The police car moved slowly into the parking lot, its search light panning back and forth.

"What do we do?"

"If we run they'll see us."

"Then get in the car," I told him.

"I can't, it's locked"

I went to reach for my keys and realized I was still naked, my clothes and keys were still inside the pool.

"Fuck – now what?"

"Just follow me..."

As the police car came closer, Donny and I crawled around the side so they couldn't see us. We were lying on the ground in front of my car when the police stopped behind it. I could hear the police radio inside the car chattering away but couldn't understand anything. The police crept forward; Donny and I crawled along the ground to the passenger side of the car.

One of the officers got out of the car and walked up to the entrance to the pool and pulled on the doors.

They opened.

"Hey! Put the lights on, I think we've got a break-in!" one of the officers said.

"SHIT!" Donny said in a whisper.

Soon the entire parking lot was lit up with red and blue swirling lights.

"Give me your shorts," I told Donny in a hushed voice

"What? Why?"

"Because I'm not going running across this parking lot buck ass naked – that's why!"

"We are not running anywhere."

"Yeah, well what are you going to do when they find my clothes, keys, and phone lying on the ground in there? Stand up and say 'hey officer – nice evening'?"

The other office got out of the car and walked up to the door with the first officer. They drew their flashlights and started shining them around the sides of the pool. The first officer went in while the other one stayed outside. If we tried to run for it, we would have been seen.

"Just calm down, they'll be gone in a few minutes," Donny whispered.

He was right. After a few minutes, the first officer came out and said he didn't see anything. But when they locked the door and it slammed shut, I thought I was going to shit myself.

"Great, now how am I supposed to get my stuff?" I whispered to Donny.

He motioned me to be quiet.

The officers walked back to their car, got in, and drove away slowly; the searchlight panning the parking lot again. When the police car went around the gold fair building, we decided it was safe to go.

"Can I have your shorts now?"

Donny pulled down his shorts and his underwear.

"What are you doing?"

"Here..." he tossed me his underwear and put his shorts back on, "...it's better than nothing."

I put them on, and then felt a wet spot in the front.

"Fuck dude, did you come in these?" I asked him.

He grinned, "...almost..."

We walked back up to the doors just to see if they really were locked and they were. When we looked at the fence, we both agreed that it was too high to climb.

"Now what"

"Now we start walking."

And we did.

It was four miles back to Joe's Pizza where we were able to get in Donny's truck and he took me home.

Donny pulled into the driveway and put the truck in Park.

"Quite a night huh," he said.


"So I guess you'll need a ride to work in the morning?"

"I guess so" I smiled back at him. He looked so sweet sitting there leaning on the steering wheel of his pick-up, his brown curly hair tousled from our tryst in the pool and the parking lot.

"I hope your parents aren't up"

I looked up at the house, "Yeah, me too."

When I turned back to say 'thanks' he had moved closer towards me and I was a little surprised.

"Shouldn't you kiss me are something," he asked me.

"Do you want me to?" I said back with a smile.

"After all the work I did tonight? I think I deserve something."

I couldn't help but laugh at him, thinking that he was joking – but he wasn't.


"Yeah Jason," he said looking at in my eyes, at my mouth, and then down my chest, "...I'm serious."

I could feel his eyes on me.

"Uh, okay..." I leaned in, closed my eyes, and readied to kiss him – that's when I felt a little slap to my face.

"Oh my god, you were really going to kiss me weren't you?"

I was shocked by his reaction. "What the..."

Donny laughed a little and apologized.

"I'm sorry dude, it's not like I think we are boyfriend and girlfriend now or anything – are we?"

"Uh, no..."

"Okay, then get the fuck out – I'll see you in the morning" he laughed.

I got out and slammed the door on his truck. He didn't wait more than two seconds before backing out and speeding away. I stood there in the wet grass – smiling.

'What an asshole', I thought to myself. I knew this was all new for him and I needed to let him figure out what he wanted to do next. If his last bit of passive aggressive behavior was a way to deal with it for now – then so be it.

But I wouldn't let him get away with it for long.


Christian Crowne

[email protected]


Rate Story Choose rating between 1 (worst) and 10 (best).

Bookmark and Share

blog comments powered by Disqus