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“The Roof”
He went under at about half nine, in roughly ninety seconds, mid-sentence.
Elliot had been in the middle of explaining the Marjorie situation, the Monday morning implications of it, the fact that a man had presented to the board and had then gone entirely dark for a weekend, the various theories she would by now have constructed, and had got about four minutes into it when he noticed that the responses had stopped.
He turned his head.
Theo was on his back with one arm flung up over the pillow and his mouth very slightly open, and he was gone. Not dozing. Gone: the whole enormous weight of him dropped straight through the floor of consciousness like something released off the back of a lorry.
"Right," said Elliot, to nobody. "Well. That's a review of the material I'll be taking on board."
He waited a bit, in case it was a trick.
It wasn’t.
Thirty-eight hours.
That was the number Elliot arrived at, lying there in the dark doing the math, and he did it three times because it kept coming out wrong. Four o'clock Saturday afternoon: fish fingers, a shower, a shift. Ten till six in an empty lobby, walking the fire doors seven times, writing one word in a log book at half twelve. Then the wrong bus. Then a landing, and a cold coffee, and a Sunday, and all of it, every hour of it, on four fish fingers and two eggs.
Thirty-eight hours, and he hadn’t once complained, or mentioned it, or made it available as information.
He had just got on with the day until the day stopped and then he had gone down like a felled tree.
Elliot lay on his side, propped on one elbow, and looked at him.
The thing about Theo Marchetti's face was that Elliot had never seen it.
Not really. He’d seen four months of it across fifteen meters of marble and had built an entire wrong theory out of it. He’d seen it lit blue from below by a bank of monitors and lit brown by a torch bounced off a lift ceiling and lit gold that afternoon by the sun coming round the back of the terraces. He’d seen it go flat in a hallway that morning and go closed in a stairwell three weeks ago, and he’d seen it open, properly, terrifyingly open, perhaps four times, always for about a second and a half.
He’d never seen it with nothing on it at all.
That was what sleep had done. Every single thing the man used had gone: the stillness that was actually vigilance, the set of the jaw, the whole vast careful apparatus of not being read. What was left was just a face, and it was, Elliot found this genuinely difficult to look at, young.
Twenty-seven. He kept forgetting. There was so much of him and he carried it all so heavily that Elliot's brain filed him somewhere in his mid-thirties, and here in the dark with his mouth open and one arm up over the pillow he looked exactly twenty-seven, which is to say two years older than Elliot and nowhere near old enough for any of it.
‘Married at twenty. A kid at twenty-one. Divorced at twenty-five’.
‘And nobody ever asked him a single question about himself’.
He catalogued him, in the dark, slowly, the way you'd read something you'd been given one night with.
The scar through the left eyebrow, a clean one, white, about an inch, older than the nose. The nose itself, going very slightly left below the bridge, which Elliot could now see was not slight at all once you knew, and which was the reason the whole face worked instead of being merely handsome.
A small pale mark under the jaw on the right side that he hadn’t noticed before.
Two on the left forearm, close together.
One across the back of the knuckles of his right hand, faded almost out.
And Elliot lay there and looked at those and wanted, with a force that surprised him, to know about every single one of them. Not to be told them as anecdotes, not the funny version, not ‘how'd you get that’. He wanted to know what year it was and who was there and whether anybody had made a fuss of him afterwards, and he had a strong and entirely unevidenced suspicion that the answer to the last one was mostly no.
He didn’t wake him up and ask.
That was the whole event of the hour, and it happened in his own chest and nobody would ever know about it: Elliot Reyes, who filled every available silence, who had never once in his life let a question sit unasked, lay in the dark with about eleven of them lined up and let every single one of them go.
‘Later’, he thought. ‘There's time. Let him sleep’.
And the ‘there's time’ went through him like something warm and awful, because he hadn’t, at any previous point, allowed himself to think in those terms at all.
The rain had come on properly outside.
It had started somewhere around four, when Theo had come back up the stairs with it in his hair, and it had settled into that steady Sunday-night London rain that means it, going on the window and on the flat roof of the launderette below and in the gutters that nobody ever did.
And Elliot became aware, lying there, of a feeling he couldn’t immediately identify, which was unusual, because he had a name for most of them and a joke for the rest.
It was somewhere behind the sternum. Large and quite calm and it had arrived at some point in the last hour, and it wasn’t desire, which he knew extremely well, and it wasn’t the vertigo of the last few weeks, which he’d been living inside since a lift broke.
It took him a while to get to it.
It was this: he didn’t want anything to happen to him.
Not to me. To him. To this man, asleep, with his mouth open, on the right-hand side of a bed in a flat above a launderette in Bethnal Green. He didn’t want anything to happen to him, not a bus, not a bad night, not a shift, not a stairwell, not the entire rest of the world, and the strength of it was so far outside anything Elliot had experienced that he lay absolutely still and let it go over him.
He’d been protected his whole life.
He'd been protected by nine people in a kitchen and a mother who made lemon drizzle when things went wrong. He'd been protected by Priya, who had held his head over a sink and never mentioned it since, and by Sef and Dom, and by the whole apparatus of being funny, which was the best protection ever devised because nobody ever gets close enough to hurt a man who's already laughing.
He’d never once protected anybody.
He wouldn’t have said he was incapable of it. He would have said, if asked, that it had simply never come up, that nobody had ever really needed him for anything more structural than a good night out, and he would have said it lightly and moved on.
And here was a man who had spent six years getting up at half two in the afternoon to do a school run, and standing in an empty lobby for sixty hours a week, and telling a six-year-old that dinosaurs can cry, and had never in his adult life had one single person on his side.
Elliot looked at the water stain on the ceiling.
‘I'm on your side’, he thought.
It was, he decided, quite possibly the least funny thought he’d ever had, and he had absolutely no wish to improve it.
At some point after midnight Theo moved.
He did it in his sleep, without any surfacing at all, turned over onto his side with a low unconscious noise, and his arm came across and found Elliot and settled, heavy as a beam, across his chest.
Elliot went completely still.
‘He's slept on his own for six years’, Elliot thought.
‘Bermondsey. Two bed. The second one's Mateo's. And on the nights the kid's at his mum's he's in that flat with the balcony you can't stand on, on his own, sleeping through the daylight with the curtains shut’.
‘Nobody's seen him like this. Nobody's been in a bed while he did this. Not since he was twenty-five’.
‘I'm the first person in six years’.
He put his hand on the man's forearm and left it there.
And Elliot, who hadn’t slept since Saturday, who had a Monday morning coming at him in seven hours and a woman called Marjorie who was going to want a debrief, lay in the dark under the weight of somebody's arm and listened to the rain and didn’t sleep at all, and didn’t, at any point, mind.
*
Theo came back at about two in the morning, and he did it badly.
There was no gentle surfacing. There was a long shuddering breath, and then the arm across Elliot's chest tightened involuntarily, and then a noise came out of him that was not a word in any language and had a considerable amount of complaint in it.
"Morning," said Elliot.
Theo said something into the pillow.
"Sorry?"
The head turned about four degrees. One eye opened, considered the situation, and closed again.
"What time is it?" he said.
"Two."
"Two."
"In the morning. It's Monday. You've been asleep for four and a half hours, which is…I've been timing it, and I want to say, as an observer, that you don't so much sleep as cease…"
"Reyes."
"Yes."
"Give me a minute."
And Theo put his face back into the pillow, and didn’t move again for some considerable time, and Elliot lay next to him in the dark and lasted, by his own later estimate, about forty seconds.
"So the plant's died."
"What?"
"The plant. On the windowsill. I did all the things…the whole protocol, I looked it up at four in the morning on Saturday, there was root rot involved, there was a repotting incident…and I've just been out there and looked at it and I think it's gone, and the thing that's upsetting me is that I don't know when it happened. It could’ve been weeks ago. It could’ve been months. I might have been watering a dead plant since the summer, Marchetti, which raises some quite serious questions about…"
Theo made a sound.
It wasn’t a word. It was somewhere between a hum and a grunt, entirely non-committal, delivered from inside a pillow, and it didn’t in any way constitute a contribution.
Elliot took it as a contribution.
"…about how long you can keep doing something for a thing that's already stopped, which is, if we're honest, a bit close to the bone for a man in my position, and I'd like to move on. Also the water stain's got bigger."
Nothing.
"I looked at it. Earlier. I got up and looked at it and I'm about eighty percent sure it's got bigger since this afternoon, which would be an extraordinary rate of…"
Nothing.
"And I've been thinking about Kwame."
Nothing.
"Because here's the thing about Kwame," said Elliot, sitting up slightly, warming to it. "You said he's been there longer than the building manager. And I've been thinking about that. Because if he's been there longer than the building manager, then technically…"
He talked for eleven minutes.
He knew it was eleven minutes because he could see the clock on the bedside table and because at some point, somewhere around minute seven, he’d begun to be aware of the clock in a way he didn’t enjoy.
He did the Kwame theory. He did Marjorie and the Monday morning implications and the various things she would by now have constructed. He did a fairly extended piece about whether they should eat something and what there was, which was nothing, and whether the place on the corner did a Sunday-night delivery, which it didn’t, and what that said about the neighborhood.
And at no point did Theo Marchetti say a single word.
He wasn’t asleep. Elliot could hear the breathing and it was not sleeping breathing. The man was lying there on his front with his face half in the pillow and one eye occasionally opening, entirely awake, letting all of it go past him like traffic.
Somewhere around minute nine Elliot understood that he wasn’t being ignored.
He was being waited out.
He stopped mid-sentence.
"…which means the delivery radius is basically a triangle, and I don't think anybody's ever…"
He stopped.
"You're not listening to me," said Elliot.
"I am."
"You've said four words in eleven minutes."
"Kwame's been there since '09," said Theo, into the pillow. "The plant was dead in August. The stain's the gutter, I told you. And you don't want to eat, you want something to do."
There was a pause.
"Right," said Elliot.
"Yeah."
"Well, that's…that's offensively accurate, actually, I'd like to lodge…"
"Reyes."
"Yes."
Theo turned over. Slowly, hauling himself onto his side, and got one arm folded under his head and looked at Elliot in the dark from about a foot away with his hair on one side flat to his skull.
"You don't have to," he said.
"Don't have to what?"
"Any of it." He shrugged the shoulder that wasn't underneath him. "There's nobody here."
That shouldn’t have landed the way it landed.
It was four words, and it was said mildly, without any edge at all, by a man who’d been asleep eleven minutes earlier, and it went into Elliot somewhere just under the ribs and stopped there, because it was the single most accurate thing anybody had said to him in about six years.
‘There's nobody here’.
Meaning: no room. No table, no floor, no group, no audience. No one to be all right for. No gap that needed a professional to close it.
Meaning: it's two in the morning and it's just me, and you can stop.
"I'm not performing," said Elliot.
"I know."
"I'm just…that's talking. That's how people talk. That's a normal conversational…"
"Right."
"You lot just lie there," said Elliot, with some heat, "in your silences, being enormous, and everybody thinks it's profound, and I want it on the record that some of us are doing the entire load-bearing work of the…"
"Reyes," said Theo. "Try it."
"Try what?"
"Not talking."
"...For how long?"
"I don't know. A bit."
And Elliot Reyes looked at him in the dark, and something in his chest actually flinched.
"Right," he said. "Fine. Yes. Easy."
He lasted eleven seconds.
"This is awful."
"You've done ten seconds."
"It's been four minutes…"
"It's been ten seconds."
"Then that clock's broken…" Elliot put both hands over his face. "God. Right. Okay. Again. Starting again. And I want to say that I'm doing this under protest and that I think it's a…"
"Reyes."
"Yes. Right. Going."
The second attempt got to about forty seconds and was, if anything, worse.
Because at eleven seconds it’d been a game, and at forty it had stopped being one. Elliot lay flat on his back in his own bed with his eyes open in the dark and discovered that when you take the talking away there is something underneath it, waiting, and that it comes up quite fast.
It wasn’t thoughts. He could’ve handled thoughts. It was more like a pressure, a rising, formless, entirely physical discomfort somewhere behind the sternum, the exact sensation of standing in a room where something needs to be said and nobody is saying it.
He’d felt it his whole life. He’d spent his whole life about four seconds ahead of it.
At approximately fifty seconds he said, in a small voice:
"Am I doing it right?"
And Theo laughed.
It came out of him, that rough surprised sound, and he put his hand over his own face, and Elliot said "don't…" and then he was laughing too, both of them, at two in the morning, until the bed shook.
"You're the worst at this," said Theo.
"I'm the best at everything else…"
"You're the worst at this. That's the worst I've ever seen anyone be at that."
"I got to fifty…"
"You got to forty and then you asked me if you were doing it right."
"Which was a legitimate procedural…"
And Theo reached over and put a hand flat on Elliot's chest, the way he had in the kitchen, two pounds of pressure, and said: "Again."
The third one lasted four minutes.
Elliot didn’t know that at the time. He found out afterwards, from the clock, and didn’t believe it.
What happened was this. He lay there with a hand on his chest and the pressure came up as it always did, and he braced against it, and then, at some point around the second minute, when nothing was said and nothing happened and no one required anything of him, it simply went.
It didn’t resolve. It just stopped, the way a noise stops, and in the place where it’d been there was nothing much.
That was the disappointing part and also the entire point. There was the radiator, cooling. There was the rain, almost finished. There was a very distant siren going south down the Cambridge Heath Road and somebody's car door two streets over, and the warm weight of a hand on his sternum going very slightly up and down with his own breathing.
There was another person in the room, being there.
And Elliot, twenty-five years old, had the strange and slightly frightening experience of finding out that a silence isn’t an empty thing you have to fill. That it has stuff in it. That if you don't get in the way, something arrives.
"Four minutes," said Theo eventually.
"Was it?"
"Yeah."
"Right," said Elliot. And then, quietly: "That was horrible."
"Yeah."
"I'd like to do it again."
"Yeah," said Theo. "I know."
They talked properly after that, for about an hour.
They found the mothers first. That was Elliot's doing, he was describing his own, the lemon drizzle and the nine people in the kitchen and the fact that she had never in her life let a silence go past unmolested, and Theo said, out of nowhere:
"Mine was the same."
"Yours?"
"She never stopped. Whole time I was growing up." A pause. "Talked at the telly. Talked at the radio. Talked to people in the shop she'd never met and then told me about them in the car."
"So where'd you get the…?" Elliot gestured at all of him, which was invisible in the dark and which Theo somehow understood anyway.
"There wasn't a gap," said Theo simply. "There was three of us and her and my nan in a two-bed and there was never a gap. So I stopped trying to get in one." He shifted. "And then it's just how you are. And then you're twenty-seven."
Elliot lay with that for a moment.
"That's mad," he said.
"What?"
"Same house. Genuinely, near enough the same house. Loud mum, no gaps, everybody talking over everybody." He turned his head. "And you went one way and I went the other."
"Yeah."
"I got louder. You went under."
"Yeah."
"And we've both ended up," said Elliot, "with exactly the same problem."
There was a long pause in the dark.
"Which is what?" said Theo.
"That we're both brilliant at rooms," said Elliot, "and neither of us can be in one."
Theo didn’t say anything for a while.
Then he said: "Can I tell you a thing?"
"Obviously."
"It's not…" He stopped. Started again. "I've done that job six years. Sixty hours a week, near enough. And it's an empty building, that's the whole job, it's you and the monitors and the river and that's it."
"Yeah."
"And I've never minded it." He said it flatly, the way he said everything. "People say to you, don't you get lonely, and you say no, and it's not a lie. It's quiet. You get used to it. It's fine."
"I know."
"Then you started coming through it," said Theo.
Elliot didn’t move.
"You'd come down about ten," said Theo. "Twice, three times a week. Coffee. Say something daft. Go back up." A pause. "And after, it'd be quiet again. Exact same lobby, same monitors, same everything."
Another pause.
"And I minded," he said.
The radiator ticked once as it cooled.
"That's…" Theo's voice had gone rough. "Four months of that. Every night. Same room I'd been fine in for six years and I'm stood in it minding, and I couldn't…I didn't know what had happened. I thought there was something wrong with me. I thought I'd gone…" he made a small helpless movement with one hand "…I don't know. Soft, or something."
Elliot kept still.
"So that's what I'd say. If you want to know why I couldn't say anything for four months." He breathed out. "It's not that I didn't know. It's that I did."
And Elliot, with an entire lifetime of material at his disposal and eleven separate things he could have said, said nothing at all.
For a long time.
On purpose.
And then he reached over and found the man's hand in the dark and held onto it, and that was the whole of his reply, and it was, by an enormous distance, and he would know it for the rest of his life, the best thing he’d ever said to anybody.
They stayed like that for a while.
And then Theo turned his hand over.
That was all it was. He didn’t sit up, or say anything, or make any kind of announcement. He simply turned his hand over underneath Elliot's so that their palms were together instead, and closed his fingers, and drew it, without any urgency, across the dark to his own chest, and held it there.
Elliot could feel his heart going under it.
Fast. Much faster than the man's breathing, which hadn’t changed at all.
Two different men in one body, and Elliot had his hand flat on the one that was telling the truth.
"Marchetti," he said.
"Yeah."
"Your heart's going."
There was a pause in the dark of about two seconds.
"I know," said Theo.
And Elliot propped himself up on one elbow, and leaned over, and stopped an inch away, close enough to feel the man's breath, that warm, faintly sweet, entirely specific thing he had memorized in a broken lift eleven weeks ago and carried around ever since, and didn’t close it.
There was the smell of rain, and the open mineral note of Theo’s skin, and not much else. There was no room. No world. Just this: their fingers laced, the pressure of two wrists side by side above the rise and fall of Theo’s chest, and the tiny shifting micro-muscles in his palm each time Elliot’s thumb tracked the bones.
He didn’t want it to get ruined by language. You could do that, if you tried, translate a human fact into pure data, offer up a punchline to the silent universe, and poof, the thing would vanish. Elliot had spent his life doing exactly that.
He wanted, now, not to.
So he sat with Theo's heartbeat thundering under his hand, and watched the streetlights drip a pattern down the wet glass, and floated there for as long as he could.
When it felt like it was time, he dipped his head that last fraction forward and brushed his mouth against Theo’s, and it didn’t feel the way he’d imagined. It was slower, and weightless.
Theo caught his jaw in one calloused hand, fingers featherlight, and for a second they just breathed the same wet, still air. Then Theo’s thumb ran the orbit from cheekbone to chin, and Elliot opened his mouth, and there was that taste again, heat and brushed steel and the glint of black coffee.
They didn’t speak. Not once. Not a whole syllable. But Elliot finished the kiss and hovered there, his breath grazing Theo’s lips, and in the new silence he pressed his forehead, gently, to the man beneath him, and felt Theo’s exhale vibrate all the way into his own teeth.
The second kiss was deeper, and he let it happen, let the focus narrow to wherever Theo’s hand landed: his scapula, his hip, the small of his back. He shifted up on both arms so their chests lined, and there was a little static crackle, and the reality of Theo’s size, the sheer amount of human present, made Elliot’s ribs light up like glass rods struck with a tuning fork.
Theo’s hands, capable of breaking a man and assembling a dinosaur skeleton from memory, slid under Elliot. He let the cold air crawl up with it, then slowed, so Elliot could feel every inch of skin that Theo’s mouth mapped. The drag of beard was a new thing, a brilliant thing, and Elliot closed his eyes at the scrape beneath his nipple, then again at his sternum, and then at the incongruous, hilarious tickle as Theo licked his way over the spot just above Elliot’s navel.
He grinned into the dark, and caught Theo’s wrist before he could go further, and thumbed the pulse point twice: Slow down. Just slow, and let it ripen.
Elliot knelt forward first, straddling Theo across the thighs, so they both had leverage, and bent to kiss that scar in Theo’s eyebrow, then retraced it with his tongue, as if memorizing a route. He sketched the line of the nose, the dip in the bridge, then moved down and kissed each eyelid as it closed. Theo didn’t smile, but his hands flexed in the sheets, and when Elliot finally pressed himself down against the man’s length, Theo stopped breathing for several seconds.
It astonished him how little space was left for fear. He was, he would have said, yesterday, terrified by all of this. But there was not a single thread of dread in him now. Just anticipation, and the wild purr of someone doing a thing for the very first time because it was exactly what it felt like.
He nipped the point of Theo’s shoulder, and let himself slip lower, and in the loose-wristed, blurry space between kisses, lifted Theo’s hand and turned the palm up. He ran a thumb through the lifeline, then brought the hand to his mouth, and, without thinking, bit the pad of the index finger very gently.
Theo flinched, barely, and then, after a pause, threaded that same finger into Elliot’s hair.
The rest of it happened suspended from time, like a bead of rain caught in a backdraft and refusing to fall. There was the spit-warm palm of Elliot’s hand as he coated Theo’s cock and stroked it, slow as the big hand on a clock. They rolled a quarter turn, Theo could have pinned him, easily, with about two percent of his mass, but he didn’t, and Elliot placed a palm on the man’s chest, acting as his own balancer, and lined himself up.
He inhaled, braced, half expecting a jolt, a pain, something dramatic. But all at once it was just right: slick, and hot, and almost forgiving, and he had to close his eyes and lean forward against Theo’s collarbone to keep from flying apart. The man’s hands rose and hovered, as if unsure what to touch, until Elliot caught one mid-air and pressed it decisively to his back.
They moved in a rhythm, at first, that made no mathematical sense but was perfect in the way a pulse under a lover’s tongue is perfect, variable, a little reckless, but always landing in the same interval. Elliot let his body decide it for him. Up, and down, and then a roll of his hips that made Theo groan through bared teeth and clutch Elliot’s waist too tightly. He rolled again, and leaned back so he could see Theo’s eyes, open now, and dark, and softer than he’d ever seen them.
He chased it: that look.
Because every time he did, every time he moved, Theo’s face transformed, and Elliot wanted to have seen every single one of those versions at least once. He reached down for Theo’s jaw as he rode, thumb tracing the curve of it, and the jaw flexed in return, teeth making a dull click at the peak of it.
When he thought he couldn’t last, he slowed. Then he’d speed up again, watch Theo’s control vanish in increments. At one point, Theo reached for his own cock, but Elliot caught his wrist and shook his head, just once, and instead closed the gap between them so Theo’s chest hair abraded his own, and the friction got him halfway there without even thinking about it.
The entire time, they still hadn’t said a word.
Nothing but the rush and shift of air, the squeak of bedsprings, the click of knuckles locking around a ribcage, and Theo’s murmurs, low, inarticulate, sometimes almost pleading, but always finished with a singular, beautiful laugh, ruined at the edges.
He pressed his cheek to Theo’s, and let the rhythm run wild for a moment, and it happened so gently that for a second he wasn’t sure it was happening at all: the orgasm broke through him almost tidily, with a bloom of heat low in his spine, and then his head went white, and he heard himself gasp a wordless syllable into the hollow beneath Theo’s ear.
He could feel Theo, too, seconds later, go rigid and then loose, and for a while he just lay there, splayed on top of him, waiting for his breath to return to normal.
And here is what neither of them could have told you afterwards, and what both of them knew.
There’s a difference between wanting somebody and having something to lose, and it isn’t a difference of degree. Everything up to that night had been the first thing: four months of a lobby and a lift indicator, eleven miles of stairs, a stairwell, a locked revolving door, a shirt with four buttons on it. All of it had run on wanting, that bright, sharp, terrible, entirely survivable engine, the one that had kept Elliot awake and kept Theo silent and had made both of them, in their separate ways, absolutely magnificent at not saying anything.
Wanting costs you nothing you can’t get back. That is its secret and its mercy. A man can want something for four months across fifteen meters of marble and lose nothing at all except the four months.
What happened in a bedroom above a launderette between three and five o'clock on a Monday morning in November was not that.
It happened without any words, which was appropriate, because neither of them had any and wouldn’t have for a long time. It happened slowly, and quietly. There was nothing frantic in it. There was nothing being proved. It was, both of them understood without ever once discussing it, the first time either of them had done this as a thing that continued, that had a Tuesday on the other side of it, and a Thursday, and some unlit stretch of time beyond that which neither of them could see and both had, that night, started counting on.
And when it was over, and the room had gone quiet, and the two of them were lying in the dark breathing at the ceiling with the whole of London asleep outside, the thing had changed.
Not the feeling.
But the stakes.
Because now there was something in the room that could be taken away. There was a shape in the world that hadn’t been there on Saturday, and it was a shape made of two people, and it could be broken, by a shift pattern, by a six-year-old, by a word said wrong in a hallway, by twenty-seven years of a man not knowing how to say anything, by a career going up a building floor by floor, by any one of nine hundred perfectly ordinary things.
They were not frightened yet.
That would come.
But somewhere between three and five in the morning, without either of them noticing, the whole of the story quietly stopped being about whether it would ever happen, and started being about whether it would survive.
*
Theo fell asleep again almost immediately, with his face against Elliot's shoulder and one arm across him, and Elliot lay awake for the second night in a row and watched the ceiling go from black to grey to a color that was not quite anything.
At about half five he said, out loud, very quietly, to the water stain:
"Right."
Theo didn’t stir.
"Right," said Elliot again, and put his hand back into the man's hair, and felt the whole enormous sleeping weight of him and the entire terrifying new architecture of his own life, and grinned at the ceiling in the dark like a lunatic.
Then he shook him gently by the shoulder.
"Marchetti."
"Mmf."
"Get dressed."
One eye opened.
"It's half five in the morning," said Theo.
"I know," said Elliot. "I'm taking you somewhere."
Getting Theo Marchetti out of a bed at twenty to six in the morning turned out to be a civil engineering problem in its own right.
"Where?"
"It's a surprise."
"Reyes."
"It's four minutes away. It's not…you don't need shoes, actually, you do need shoes, you'll definitely want shoes…"
"Is it outside?"
"Marginally."
"Marginally."
"It's technically outside," said Elliot, from the doorway, already dressed, already holding two blankets and a plastic bag. "It's outside."
Theo sat up.
He did it in stages, like machinery being brought back online after a fault, and he sat on the edge of the bed with his hair doing something remarkable on one side and looked at the floor for a moment. Then he said, to the carpet, in the voice of a man reading out a fact:
"I've been asleep four hours in two days."
"I know."
"And it's twenty to six."
"I know," said Elliot, "and I've decided it's worth it, so you're just going to have to trust me, which I'm aware is an enormous ask at twenty to six in the morning…"
Theo stood up and started looking for his jeans.
"Where are we going?"
"Just…put your boots on."
The back of 41 Marchmont Row was reached through the door at the end of the second-floor landing, which had a sign on it saying FIRE EXIT KEEP CLEAR and behind which the residents of the building kept, in defiance of the sign, a mop, a broken hoover and a bicycle.
Elliot shouldered it open and the November came in at them: five degrees, dead still, everything soaked from the rain and the sky above the terraces gone that deep clear black-blue you get for about forty minutes before a winter dawn.
"Right," he said. "So."
Theo came out onto the iron platform behind him and stopped.
He looked up. Then down. Then at the wall where the whole assembly was bolted into the brick, and then along the run of it, and then at his own feet.
"Reyes," he said.
"Yes."
"What is this?"
"It's a fire escape."
"It's a hundred and forty years old, is what it is." Theo crouched, without any apparent concern for his own dignity, and put two fingers on the join where the platform met the upright. He rubbed at it. He looked at what came off on his fingers. "Look at that."
"I'd rather not."
"That's not rust, that's…that's gone. That's laminating. When it goes flaky like that it's not on the surface, that's all the way through…"
"It holds."
"How d'you know it holds?"
"Because I've been up it four hundred times," said Elliot, "and I'm alive."
"That's not…" Theo straightened up. "Reyes, that's not how metal works. That's a survivorship thing, that's like saying nobody's ever drowned in this river because you can't ask the ones who…"
"It's four flights…"
"It's four flights of Victorian ironwork that nobody's inspected since Blair," said Theo, "and it's wet."
And Elliot, standing on the platform with two blankets under his arm and a plastic bag containing a torch and half a bottle of wine, discovered that he was enjoying himself enormously.
"Are you scared?" he said.
Theo looked at him.
"No," he said, with total flatness. "I'm informed."
They went up.
Elliot went first, which he always did, at the pace he always did, taking the flights two at a time on the outside edges where the tread was better, and became aware, somewhere around the second landing, of a very particular quality of silence coming from about eight feet below him.
Theo was climbing the way a large man climbs a structure he doesn’t trust: slowly, with one hand on the rail at all times, testing each platform before he put his weight fully on it, and looking, at each level, at the bolts.
"You're doing the bolts."
"I'm looking at the bolts."
"You've looked at every single set of bolts…"
"There's a bolt missing on that one," said Theo.
"What?"
"Second landing. Bottom left. There's four holes and three bolts." He kept coming. "That's why it moves."
"It doesn't move…"
"It moves, Reyes. You've been going up it four hundred times, you've stopped noticing. It moves about that much." He held up a thumb and finger with a gap in between them.
"That's nothing."
"That's nothing now."
And then they got to the top platform, and Elliot stopped, and Theo came up level with him, and the entire tenor of the evening changed.
Because the fire escape ended.
That was the design, and it had presumably made sense to somebody in 1883: the ironwork terminated at a small square platform outside the top-floor bathroom window, and above it there was four feet of soot-blackened London stock brick, and above that was the stone lip of the parapet and the edge of the roof.
Four feet of nothing.
Theo looked at it. He looked at it for a long time. Then he leaned out slightly, one hand on the rail, and looked down, past three platforms and forty feet of wet iron into the communal yard, and then he came back in and looked at Elliot.
"No," he said.
"What?"
"No."
"You haven't even…"
"There's no stairs, Reyes."
"There's a technique…"
"There's a technique?"
"You get up on the rail," said Elliot, "and you get both hands on the parapet, and you…it's basically a step. It's one big step. I've done it drunk, which I accept isn't the recommendation I thought it was going to be when I started this sentence…"
"You get up on the rail?"
"Yes."
"On the handrail. Of a hundred-and-forty-year-old fire escape. Four story’s up. In the wet." Theo's voice hadn’t changed at all, which was the thing that told you. "And then you let go of it and put both hands on a parapet you can't see the top of, and swing."
"When you say it like that…"
"I'm saying it like it is."
"Watch," said Elliot. "Honestly. Watch. It's fine."
And he handed over the blankets and the bag, and got a foot up onto the rail.
He did it badly.
He didn’t know this. He’d been doing it badly for three years, entirely unaware, because there had never been anybody there to watch: he went up onto the handrail with one foot, wobbled, actually wobbled, a good four inches, with forty feet of yard underneath him, got both hands over the parapet, scrabbled once with his left boot against the brick, and hauled himself up and over onto the flat asphalt in a manner that could not have been called anything but scrambling.
He turned round and looked back down over the edge, pleased with himself.
"See?"
Theo Marchetti was standing on the platform below him holding two blankets and a plastic bag, and he had gone absolutely white.
"Marchetti…"
"You wobbled."
"I always wobble, the wobble's part of…"
"You wobbled on a handrail," said Theo, and his voice had gone somewhere Elliot had never heard it, low and completely flat and slightly unsteady at the edge, "with a forty-foot drop, and you scrabbled, I saw you scrabble, your boot went and it slipped…"
"It's wet, that's…"
"And you've done that four hundred times."
"I've never once…"
"On your own," said Theo, "with nobody in the building knowing you're up here, and no phone signal I'd bet, and if that boot goes six inches the other way then somebody finds you on Tuesday."
There was a silence.
It went on for a bit.
Elliot lay on his front on the parapet with his head over the edge, four feet above a man holding two blankets, and discovered that something extremely peculiar was happening in his chest.
It wasn’t embarrassment. It wasn’t even, particularly, the sensation of being told off, which he was familiar with and didn’t enjoy.
It was that somebody was frightened for him.
Nobody had ever been frightened for him. He’d been loved, comprehensively, by a great many people, and he’d been worried about, in the general sense, in the way that Priya worried about whether he was eating and his mother worried about whether he was happy. But nobody had ever stood underneath him and gone white.
"Right," said Elliot, in a completely different voice. "Sorry."
"Don't…"
"No, I mean it. That's…yeah." He put his chin on his hands. "I hadn't thought about it. Genuinely. I've done it so many times it stopped being a thing."
"That's how it works," said Theo. "Nothing's a thing until it is."
And then, because he was who he was, he started solving it.
Elliot watched it happen. It took about forty seconds, and it was, he would think later, the single most romantic thing that had ever occurred in his presence.
"You want a rung," said Theo, looking at the brick.
"A what?"
"A rung. There. About here." He put his hand flat on the brickwork, a foot above the rail. "One rung, resin-bolted, into the mortar. Not the brick, the mortar. So you've got something to put your foot on that's not a handrail." He looked up. "And a grab handle on the parapet. There, where you go over. Stainless, so it doesn't rot, and you'd have to get up there and see what the coping's like first because if that's loose then none of it's…"
"Marchetti."
"Or a board." He wasn’t listening. He had gone somewhere entirely internal, standing on a Victorian fire escape at ten to six on a Monday morning holding two blankets, mentally installing equipment. "You could do it with a scaffold board and two brackets. That's cheaper. That'd give you a proper step and a handhold at the same time, and you could take it down if the landlord…"
"Marchetti."
He stopped.
"What?"
"You've been in this building twice," said Elliot, from the parapet, "and you've offered to paint it, fix the sofa, do the bathroom door, clear the gutters and now you want to install climbing equipment on the exterior."
"You've got a lot wrong with it."
"You're going to bolt things to a listed building…"
"It's not listed."
"How do you know…?"
"Terrace like that, and the windows have been done? It's not listed," said Theo. "And it'd take an afternoon."
And Elliot lay on his front on a wet parapet in the dark and laughed until he had to stop because he was in genuine danger of falling off it, which rather proved the man's entire point.
Getting Theo up was an event.
He went up the same way Elliot had, which is to say the only way there was, and he did it with a level of controlled deliberation that made it look less like climbing and more like a lock closing: one foot on the rail, both hands testing the parapet, weight transferred once and completely, no wobble anywhere at any point. He came over the top and onto the roof in one enormous unhurried movement and stood up on the asphalt and didn’t, it seemed, find any of it remotely difficult.
"Oh, you bastard," said Elliot.
"What?"
"You went up it like a stair."
"You've got to test it first…"
"Four hundred times I've been scrabbling up that thing and you've gone up it like someone getting out of a bath…"
"You'd be all right if you didn't rush," said Theo, brushing his hands off, "and if you had a rung."
"I DON'T WANT A RUNG."
"You want a rung."
And then he looked up, and stopped talking entirely, because he had turned round and seen where he was.
The roof of 41 Marchmont Row was about the size of a tennis court and entirely flat, black asphalt with a low stone parapet running round the whole of it, and at ten to six on a clear November morning there was nothing above it at all.
That was what it did to people, or would have done, if it had ever done it to anybody.
You came up over that parapet out of a terraced street where the houses were four story’s and the sky was a strip between chimney pots, and then there was nothing in the way. Three hundred and sixty degrees of it. The whole low sprawl of Bethnal Green going off east in orange and grey, and the towers of the City standing up to the west with their lights still on at the top, and the Shard away south with its point in nothing, and over all of it that enormous smoky orange-brown ceiling that London puts up at night, so bright that there were only about nine stars in the whole sky and one of them was probably a plane.
And it was completely silent.
Elliot had never got used to that and didn’t expect to.
Theo Marchetti stood in the middle of it and turned round once, slowly, all the way, and didn’t say anything.
"Right," said Elliot. "So. This is the roof."
"Yeah."
"There's a sofa."
"I can see the sofa."
Elliot got the crate out from behind it and did the things he always did: the string of fairy lights along the top of the parapet, clipped on with clothes pegs. The battery pack switched on. The two blankets out of the zip bag. The CD player set down on the asphalt.
He pressed the lid until it clicked and pressed play, and the thing spun up, and the first track came out of it at low volume into all that open air.
Kid Loco. I Want You. From the Kill Your Darlings album.
‘A dizzy hot morning never comes
With the ringing of a clock
But you can trust me baby
We'll find a new one in a shop
The steel wheels of a thousand headaches
Are broken a million miles away
They just started to make me see
The morning on a brand new day
Honey I want you
I want you
I want you
Honey I want you’
Theo sat down on the sofa.
He sat down carefully, which Elliot enjoyed, and then found the spring, and moved eight inches to the left, and didn’t comment.
"You get used to it," said Elliot.
"How long's it been up here?"
"Three years."
"In the rain."
"In the rain, yeah."
"That's not a sofa anymore, it’s a sponge, Reyes."
"You'll hurt its feelings," said Elliot, and sat down next to him and put one of the blankets over both of their laps, and Theo went quiet.
They looked at the view.
Elliot let it go for a bit, a minute, maybe more, which two weeks ago would have been impossible and which now, he noticed with some private satisfaction, he could just about manage.
‘I made a living out of drinking coffee
Thinking I should get ready
It's not like I got in touch with this
I got my eyes open wide
You might think once is too much
But a thousand times is not enough
So come on here pretty baby
Cos the factory ain't the place to be
Honey I want you
I want you
I want you
You know I want you’
Then he said, without any particular weight on it:
"You're the first person who's ever been up here."
He had meant it to come out lightly.
It came out flat instead, and quiet, and it went across the whole roof and landed somewhere over by the water tank, and afterwards nobody said anything for a considerable time.
Theo didn’t turn his head.
That was, Elliot thought later, the exact correct response, and no one else he’d ever met would have managed it. He didn’t make a thing of it. He sat there under half a blanket on a wet sofa on a roof and looked at the City and let the sentence be true for as long as it needed.
The music went on.
‘I'm gonna tell them that I'm sick
Or maybe stoned, I really got loaded
And that I fucked up my mind
And now my brain's right out of my head
I'm gonna tell them that I'm dumb, deaf, blind but I can see
The only place I wanna be
Is in the arms of my baby
Honey I want you
I want you
I want you
I want you
Honey I want you’
"How'd you find it?" said Theo.
"Drunk. First month here. I was twenty-two and I'd been at a thing in Dalston and I came home and I didn't want to go in." Elliot pulled the blanket up. "And I'd seen the fire escape and I thought…I don't know what I thought. And I got up on the rail."
"Drunk."
"Extremely."
Theo shut his eyes briefly, in the manner of a man declining to reopen a case.
"And I got up here and stood about there," said Elliot, pointing, "and I looked at all that, and I thought, right. Okay. Good."
"Good what?"
"Just good," said Elliot.
They talked for a while about nothing again, which was becoming, Elliot noticed, a habit and possibly the best one he had ever formed.
Theo wanted to know about the CD, so Elliot got the case out of the crate and showed him a burned CD-R with fifteen track names on it in the handwriting of a fifteen-year-old, and Theo read the whole list in silence and then said, "That's a lot of feelings for a Tuesday," and Elliot took it off him.
Theo wanted to know how the sofa had got up.
Elliot explained about the two Julys and the rope and the incident with the second-floor bathroom window, and Theo listened to the entire thing, and at the end said only: "You could've killed somebody."
"Nobody was under it…"
"You had a sofa on a rope…"
"It was a system…"
And the sky in the east had started, very slightly, to think about it. Not light. Just the black-blue over toward Hackney going one shade less absolute than it had been, the way it does forty minutes ahead of anything.
And then Elliot turned and looked out at the view instead of at him, and said:
"Can I tell you the thing about this place."
"Go on."
He didn’t turn round. That was the only way it was going to be possible, and he understood that perfectly well, and he’d learned it from the man sitting next to him: that there are things you can say to a door, or a ceiling, or a city, that you can’t say to a face.
"It's because up here I'm not doing anything."
He put his hands round his knees.
"Down there I'm…you've seen it."
"I know."
"But it's work," said Elliot. "That's the bit nobody knows. It's constant, and it's exhausting, and I've never once put it down. And then I come up here."
He gestured, vaguely, at the whole enormous orange sky.
"And there's nobody to be funny at," he said. "So I stop. And I don't say anything for two hours and I don't have to be anybody. That's it. It's not a nice view with a sofa on it. It's the bit of me that hasn't got an audience."
The music went round to the second skip, and skipped, and carried on.
He breathed out.
"Anyway," he said. "That's the roof. Welcome to the roof."
And then, because it had gone on too long and because there was a shape in his chest that was getting difficult to carry, he did the only thing available.
"So obviously I'm going to have to kill you now," he said. "You've seen. I'll make it quick, we'll go over the parapet, I'll tell them about the bolts…"
He turned round.
Theo Marchetti was sitting on the other end of the sofa with the blanket over his lap and his hands loose between his knees, and he wasn’t laughing, and he hadn’t moved, and his eyes were wet.
Not crying. He hadn’t made a sound and there was nothing on his face at all, the whole of it perfectly still, except that in the light coming up off the fairy lights and the enormous orange ceiling of the city, both his eyes were absolutely full.
"Oh," said Elliot.
Theo’s moved once.
And Elliot, who had a joke ready, who had two, who had spent his entire life ensuring that no moment anywhere ever went unmanaged, got up off that sofa and crossed four feet of wet asphalt and jumped.
He didn’t think about it. He got a run of about two steps and went up and Theo caught him, of course he caught him, one arm under and one across the back, absorbing the entire weight of him without moving his feet, and Elliot's legs went round his waist and his arms went round the man's neck and he put his face down into the side of it, hard.
They stayed like that.
"I don't know what this is," Elliot said, into his neck.
It came out muffled and wrecked and about half an octave off.
And he lifted his head and got a hand round the man's jaw and kissed him.
It went on for a long time.
When it ended, Theo didn’t let go of him.
He stood there in the middle of a roof at four minutes past six in the morning holding an entire adult man off the ground as though it were nothing whatsoever, and said, very low, into the space between them:
"Nor do I."
"No?"
"No."
"Right," said Elliot. "Good. Great. Well, that's…that's absolutely no help at all, is what that is."
"No."
Elliot laughed, and his voice broke halfway through it, and he didn’t attempt to disguise that.
"What now?" he said.
"Dunno."
"No, but genuinely. Because I've got work in three hours, and you've got a twenty-four hour shift starting at ten tonight that you've done to yourself entirely voluntarily, and none of that has anything to do with this…"
"Reyes."
"…and I feel like we should be writing some of it down, is what I'm saying. Formally." He was talking too fast. "You could put it in the log book. Nought six hundred hours, roof of a residential building in Bethnal Green, two males, no further action…"
And Theo laughed.
Right against Elliot's shoulder, and Elliot felt the whole of it go through both of them.
"Four pages," said Theo.
"FOUR PAGES…"
"It'd be four pages."
"Oh, that's devastating, that's genuinely…"
Then Theo stopped laughing.
He shifted his grip, and got one hand up into the back of Elliot's hair, and brought him down and kissed him again, and when he pulled back he kept his hand where it was.
"I'd rather nobody knew," he said.
Elliot went still.
"Not…" Theo stopped. His jaw worked. "That's not…I'm not saying it right."
"Say it however."
"I've never had anything of my own," said Theo.
The music went round.
‘Honey I want you
I want you
I want you
I want you
Honey I want you
I want you
Honey I want you
I want you
Honey I want you’
"Marchetti…"
"I've not had one thing," said Theo, "in twenty-seven years, that was just mine. Not one. And I've got this."
He looked at him.
"I know."
"I just want to keep it a bit," said Theo. "Just ours. For a bit. Is that all right?"
And Elliot Reyes, held four inches off the ground on a rooftop above Bethnal Green at six minutes past six on a Monday morning, looked at the enormous, exhausted, entirely undefended man holding him, and didn’t make a single joke.
Instead, he nodded.
"Yeah," he said. "Just ours."
(To be continued…)
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