Borrowing

Author’s Notes: A long, long time ago, Kink.com had a script contest. This was my submission. You can read it or not since it isn’t a traditional story. Nevertheless, I thought the premise was kind of hot…and I may make a story out of it…(in my Mariah Carey high note) Somedayyyyy!

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FADE IN.

 

INT. SHOOTING RANGE SET

 

MALE SUBMISSIVE is naked, blindfolded, and fully suspended in a horizontal position with feet in the air. There are a multitude of guys standing around listening to him pant as a machine slowly fucks him. However, there are only three men within real touching distance of him with JOSH and CHRISTIAN standing at his torso and AVELLO standing between his spread legs, nearest one of his feet, tickling the sole.

 

AVELLO

Where did you get this one from, Josh?

 

JOSH

From the family: borrowed the son of a bitch from my sister, Vonnie.

 

Christian slaps Male Submissive on the chest.

 

CHRISTIAN

Hot damn! He’s her husband.

 

JOSH

Shit yeah!

 

AVELLO

Your brother-in-law?

 

JOSH

Yeah. Him and she borrowed some money from me awhile back to save their crappy little house in the suburbs. When it was time to pay up, they didn’t have a pot to piss in.

 

CHRISTIAN

So you made an arrangement with them?

 

JOSH

Yeah, I told her that he could work some of it off around the house and whatnot.

 

Avello tickles his feet. Male Submissive jerks up and back down on the fuck machine.

 

AVELLO

And whatnot.

 

Josh smirks.

JOSH

And whatnot.

 

 

Avello continues to tickle his feet. Male Submissive reacts and comes back down on fuck machine when Josh comes across his stomach with a flogger and commences to get off in a gangbang featuring flogging, tickling, fuck machine, more sucking than fucking, and men coming in his face (only).

 

After leaving Male Submissive to feel like an utter whore, Avello pulls Josh aside.

 

AVELLO

What is the money that they owe you?

 

JOSH

Who? My brother-in-law? Two grand. Why?

 

AVELLO

What if I said, I’ll give you that money back if you’d let me keep him for the rest of the weekend.

 

JOSH

Something to think about.

 

AVELLO

What’s there to think about? You walk away whole.

 

JOSH

That’s not the problem. It’s coming up with a good story to tell my sis for him being gone the entire weekend.

 

FADE OUT

 

INT. TRAINER’S OFFICE B, SUBMISSION SET B, or POWER ROOM SETS

 

Male Submissive is collared and chained on hands and knees being led onto set by Avello wearing leather pants and boots.

 

AVELLO

Heel.

 

Male Submissive stops.

 

AVELLO

You know what to do scumbucket.

 

Male Submissive licks his boots.

 

Christian enters in jockstrap.

 

CHRISTIAN

Looks like you’ve trained him well. He didn’t even look up!

 

Male Submissive looks up.

 

Avello jerks his boot away.

 

AVELLO

What did I tell you about having only one master? You look up when I tell you to look up, and don’t speak unless I tell you, too. Lick boot.

 

Male Submissive continues to lick boot.

 

CHRISTIAN

That’s where you’re wrong. He’s got two masters’ until you give me my five hundred dollars back.

 

AVELLO

I’ll pay you back next week.

 

CHRISTIAN

I want to take it out of his ass today.

 

FADE OUT

 

The scene returns to Male Submissive bent over an object with his ass reddened with a couple of hands coming across his bare bottom. Avello or Christian has him by the wrist weeping as it shows Male Submissive have his wrists tied behind his back.

 

Avello and Christian stand Male Submissive up.

 

AVELLO

How about getting your share of the money tonight?

 

FADE OUT

 

INT. PIT ROOM or PADDED CELL

 

Male Submissive is in vertical suspension with many (new) men in leather around him. They get off in a hardcore gangbang featuring hard nipple play, punching, clothespins, flogging, bootlicking, foot worshiping, body-worshipping, multiple fellatio, hardcore fucking (suspension and cage), double penetration, dildos, electric wand, the works.

 

FADE OUT

 

EXT. ROOFTOP

 

Josh is in regular attire with his boots on. Male Submissive is naked and in a fetal position but acts as if he is still tied up (but isn’t).

 

Josh raises his boot onto Male Submissive’s side and looks down.

 

JOSH

Tell Vonnie that your debt with me is settled. Thought after the weekend you’ve had, well, that debt can never be repaid.

 

END