An Evening of Devotion

A retelling of my own experience with a partner

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He arrived late, wearied but glowing from the day's labour, the scent of dusk still clinging to him. I had been waiting not just for him, but for the quiet ritual we’d come to cherish. The air was warm, holding a hush like a secret about to unfold.

Instead of letting him slip into routine, I drew him gently past the threshold, unfastening his shirt as if removing the hours that had weighed on him. He settled into the sofa , and I knelt before him, hands tracing slow paths up his legs, over clothes and skin. The heat between us wasn’t rushed it was reverent.

His boots,steel toe capped worn and stinky heavy with purpose and distance, became symbols of closeness. I held them, kissed them, breathed in their story. There was something primal in it, something grounding a reminder of how our worlds collide in the smallest gestures.

He watched, silent but alert, as I took my time, exploring with fingertips and breath. Even his stinky sweaty  once white socks carried meaning, damp with presence. My face pressed into his soles as if to anchor myself in him.

The night unfolded like poetry delicate, deliberate, and charged with the warmth of shared knowing not one in dominant and submissive but trust and sacred sexuality

Time slowed for us in that hush between heartbeats. I lingered at his feet, tracing the shape of each moment with soft touch and quiet reverence. The world outside dimmed, and all that remained was the presence we built together steady, tender, and charged.

He watched me with a half-smile, the kind that holds stories not yet spoken. My fingers moved over him like verses in a favourite poem, knowing where each line curved and rose. His sighs were the punctuation; his warmth, the rhythm.

There was no hurry. Just the ceremony of connection the way skin responds to intention, the way silence becomes a kind of music between lovers. I let myself be held by the gravity of him, by the smell of the day lingering on leather and cloth, by the quiet offering of trust.

I cupped his heel as though holding a relic, a piece of him carved by his own journey. Each gesture said, “I see you. I honour you. Stay a while.”

And so he did.

The quiet unfolded like silk between us.

By then, the night was fully ours. His hands rested gently, fingertips brushing my shoulders with the softness of someone who knows they are deeply known. There was no script, no rhythm beyond the natural cadence of breath and gaze—just the slow weaving of our presence into something sacred.

I kissed the arch of his foot as if it were a wish—one whispered centuries ago, finally arriving with the weight of truth. In that moment, everything was permission. Permission to feel, to worship, to linger. My touch became tender reverence, an ode to every step he had taken, every burden he had carried.

The living room flickered with low lamplight, casting warm halos around our entwined quiet. His eyes caught mine and held them, full of a silent smile that said: stay. I nestled deeper, letting all thoughts feelings an energy ebb into nothingness 

The night surrendered to stillness, and in that hush we remained a sanctuary built not of walls, but of presence.

He shifted slightly, drawing his legs up so that I could settle beside him. My head found rest on his chest, rising and falling in time with breath and heartbeat. The scent of work and warmth lingered on his skin like memory, anchoring me to something quiet and sacred. I traced lazy patterns across his abdomen, the softness of his skin contrasting the rugged spirit that lived just beneath. The lamp’s glow turned the room into a chapel of golden shadows.

Neither of us spoke, though the language between us was fluent and tender. In the silence, I felt him reach not just with hands, but with all the unspoken pieces of himself. The way he brushed a lock of hair from my face was a sonnet in motion. The way he sighed was scripture.

I watched as he closed his eyes, not out of fatigue, but as if to savour the stillness of being seen, being chosen. And so I stayed. Draped against him like a whispered vow.

Outside, the wind teased the trees. Inside, love pressed deeper not in grand declarations, but in the patience of touch, in the grace of being met exactly as we are. There was no beginning or end to it. Just the feeling of time bending around us, slow and warm and forgiving.

It was here, in this pocket of quiet devotion, that I understood something lasting: intimacy lives in the rituals we create, the pauses we honour, and the way we offer our presence as a form of prayer

The End 

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