Returning the Favor - Dominic's POV

by Lance Abrams

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This is my story, "Returning the Favor", told from Dominic's POV. As always, leave a comment below or email me if you liked the story, or have any feedback! Follow me on twitter @QuesadillaNFrys for previews and depictions of my stories! If you have a story idea you'd like me to write, check my profile for instructions and email me at [email protected]!

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"I'm sorry, Dominic, it's out of my hands," Coach Bailey said. "If you don't get your history grade up, you'll be kicked off the team. It's the school rules."

"But coach, what about the game next Friday?" I protested. "The team needs me!"

"Then I guess you'll have to work your ass off to be there for them."

It was useless. I knew I couldn't argue against school rules, no matter how hard I tried, but if I got cut just because of some bad test scores, I'd be letting everyone down. I'm Dominic Moreno, captain of the football and baseball teams. Sports are practically my life, and the idea of getting kicked off made me sick to my stomach.

"Look," Coach said, "I'll get you a tutor. The best one they got. I can't change the rules, but I can sure as hell do whatever I can to help you get your grades up."

"Thanks, coach," I said half-heartedly, as I walked out of his office and through the locker rooms to the hallways.

"How'd it go?" a voice behind me asked. I turned around to see my three closest friends and fellow teammates, Marco, Victor, and Cooper.

Cooper, like me, was a big guy, in fact, bigger than me. When high school started, both of us were pretty thin, and had both just started working out when we met Freshman year. Over the last four years, we'd trained and worked out together, helping each other get our bodies where they were. His auburn hair stuck up out of his head, and he looked like a tank moving through the corridor. Of the three, he was also the one I was closest to.

Despite being thinner than us, Marco and Victor were still muscular, and made most other guys look scrawny by comparison. I met them freshman year also, but they'd been friends and neighbors since they were in diapers, and did everything together. They'd often share stories of three-ways and four-ways they'd had with girls, often sharing them between each other. Without a doubt, they were the most comfortable around each other in the locker room, even naked. Marco had a strong Latin complexion and messy yet straight black hair, while Victor had short, gelled-up, dirty blonde hair.

"So-so, I guess," I said, addressing Cooper, who'd asked the question. "He's gonna get me a tutor, help me pass the next test."

"Good," Marco added.

"You got this, man. You'll crush that test." Victor said.

We walked to our next classes, talking and sharing stories of recent parties until we had to split and get to class.

At lunch, I met up with my girlfriend, Sophie, and kissed her. "Hey, babe," she said, but not in the sweet, almost seductive tone that I usually got from her. "Ugh, you're not gonna BELIEVE what happened! Some nerdy asshat, a freshman or something, just totally pushed right by me, nearly knocked me over! Ugh. The people in this school are just...so rude!"

I pulled her in to a hug. "I know, babe," I said, trying to calm her down. "Tell you what, if I ever see the guy who did, I'll give him a real ass-beating. Won't be able to walk for a week, and definitely won't be knocking into anyone."

"Thanks, babe," Sophie said sweetly. "Love you!"

Personally, I had no real animosity towards anyone, and I mostly just told her I'd handle it to calm her down. I've never really fought a whole lot of people; my muscles were for sports, not fighting, and I never really felt any need to hurt people. She'd almost certainly forget after today anyway; she usually did. Whoever this kid was, he was just a blip on her radar. Sophie and I were the most popular people in school; she was captain of the cheerleading team, while I was captain of the football and baseball teams. It was only natural that we'd get together eventually; everyone in the school had practically expected it. We were by no means the perfect couple, of course: like any other couple, we fought (well, maybe more than others), and even broke up a few times. But after a while, we'd eventually work things out and stay together. That's how it always went. In fact, we'd had a pretty big one not too long ago. I wasn't sure if we'd work things out, but after she ended it, a week and a half later she wanted to get back together. If I needed space, I could usually get it when travelling for sports anyway. Generally, however, we had a good relationship. And she was hot as fuck, too. It helped that her cheerleading practice had made her exceptionally flexible...

"By the way, coach said—" I started, before Sophie interrupted me.

"—And he didn't even apologize!" she fumed, back to being angry. "The nerve of some people!"

***

Lunchtime passed by quickly, as well as the rest of the school day. After it ended, I went to football practice. Coach ran us through some new plays, and gave us his regular end-of-practice pep talk.

"Remember, we're playing our rivals soon! I know we lost last time, but you guys can do this! You've been working hard and I now you're ready!"

That was really all I paid attention to, because when I glanced at the bleachers to see someone walking up them, I noticed a kid who fit Sophie's description, same shirt and everything. I was pretty sure his name was Leo; he was in a few classes with me, but we didn't really interact much. By the time I turned my attention back to coach, he was finished, and called me off to the sidelines to speak to him privately.

"Leo over there is gonna be your tutor," coach said, pointing over to the guy sitting in the bleachers. "You've got your first tutoring session right now. Don't let us down, Moreno! Pass that test, and we'll see you right here for the game next Friday. We're counting on you!"

"I won't, coach!" I said. I sprinted over to the bleachers. There sat a skinny kid in a grey hoodie. He had straight, jet-black hair, that, like mine, seemed to stand up naturally. I'd never really paid much attention to him, but it seemed like he was taller than me.

"Hey Leo!" I said, offering a fist bump. "So coach says you're gonna tutor me in history?"

"Yeah," he said. "Ms. Edwards insisted. They want me to help you get your grades up."

"Awesome. Edwards is a cool lady," I said. She had really been trying to help me. Although a lot of the school faculty cared about the success of our sports teams, it seemed like she really wanted to see me succeed for myself, not just the school. "A lot of teachers would've just let me fail, but she's really been trying hard. I'd really let her down if I failed," I continued.

"Well I'll make sure that doesn't happen," he said.

"Cool! let's head over to the tables and get started," I offered. We walked over to some tables near the gym entrance. They were used for concessions during games, and if it was nice outside sometimes the school would let us eat out here.

"Let's start with a practice test," he said, and slid a piece of paper in front of me. Fuck. A practice test? We haven't even started yet. "Don't worry too much about how you do on it. It's just to figure out where you are and what we should begin with."

I don't know why, but for some reason his reassurance calmed me down. If it was just to figure out what I needed to work on, I could do that. "No problem!" I said, and picked up a pencil. The next 20 minutes felt like an hour, but I managed to complete it. It was hard as shit, but I wasn't gonna screw up with everything on the line.

"Done!" I said, and he took the test.

"Great! I'll grade this, then we'll figure out what we need to work on."

"Actually," I said, "You mind if I go for a quick run around the track while you do? It gets my blood flowing and helps me think."

Leo let me go, and I jogged around the track for the next 10 minutes until he signaled to me to go back over.

"How'd I do?" I asked as I came to a stop at the table.

"You got a 52," Leo said.

A 52? Fuck. I was never gonna pass with a 52. I knew I wouldn't score well on the practice test, but it still stung to hear it out loud. "Dammit. I gotta pass this class if I wanna stay on the team. Coach said I have to." I facepalmed. What's the point if I can't pass the test? I didn't have very long, and I wasn't sure how much effort a smart guy like Leo would want to invest in helping me. It was fucking pointless.

"Hey man, we've got some stuff to work on for sure, but it's not too bad. I've helped people bounce up from even worse."

"You can really help me, bro?" I asked. I still wasn't sure, but Leo seemed pretty certain he could help me.

"Yeah, I'm sure of it," he replied. Then he was more sure about it than I was. But his optimism seemed to get to me, because next thing I knew, I agreed to give it a try anyway.

"Thanks so much man," I replied. "This really means a lot. I'm gonna make it up to you!" If he could help a dumbass like me pass a test, he deserved a Nobel.

"There's really no need," he said. "I'm a tutor, it's my job. And besides, Ms. Edwards asked me. I couldn't say no to her."

For the next hour, Leo tutored me. To my surprise, this stuff was actually starting to make sense. I don't know what it was, but Leo's tutoring seemed to get through to me. The way he explained it just made sense. He also let me take a break to run laps every so often, which helped to keep me focused.

As I ran back from my final lap, Leo checked his phone. "Shit," he said. "I really gotta go, before I miss the last late bus." Fuck. I hadn't realized how late it was already; I guess we'd been studying for a while.

"Come on dude, really? I feel like this shit is starting to click." I said.

"Sorry Dominic, if I don't, I'll have to walk all the way home, and my mom will kill me if I'm late."

"Please, bro? Just quiz me in the locker room, I'll drive you home after I shower and change. You'll get there before you even would if you took the bus."

"Alright, fine. But you take me right home."

"Deal."

Leo followed me to the locker room and started quizzing me as I got undressed. After a few questions, he stopped talking, and I turned around to see him staring at me. I quickly realized the problem.

"Oh shit!" I grabbed a towel nearby and wrapped it around my waist. It was totally normal for me to change in front of other guys, and I hadn't really given a second thought to it until just now. It dawned on me that Leo wasn't an athlete, and wouldn't be used to a guy changing in front of him. "Sorry, I normally undress in front of my teammates all the time. I wasn't thinking. It's just, since you're...gay and everything, I hope that it doesn't make you uncomfortable or anything."

"It's fine," Leo said. "Just a little...distracting, is all. You didn't do anything wrong, just pretend I'm not here."

"Okay, cool man," I said, getting back to my post-practice routine as he continued asking questions.

"You know, as distracting as it was, I can't say I don't like what I see," Leo said a few minutes later. That got my attention. I mean, I'd been complimented by guys on my naked body before, but usually it was my straight teammates, who said it as fellow athletes, without any desire (except maybe a bit of jealousy that they don't have a body like mine). But this felt...different. More intriguing. Leo had said with with genuine interest, and it made me curious.

"Oh yeah?" I said.

"Yeah. You're hot, dude. Like, I wish I had that body," he said with a hint of nervousness in his voice, maybe worried I'd be put off by his compliment. "I'm just a scrawny little nerd," he continued.

"Thanks, bro," I said, and returned the compliment. "I'm sure yours isn't as bad as you think, though." We kept going with the practice questions, and I don't know what came over me, but at that point I just got the urge to start showing off, flexing and bouncing my pecs a bit, wiggling my butt for Leo. I'm not sure why, but this nerd gave me a surprising amount of confidence. I didn't mind putting on a bit of a show for him.

I answered a few more of the practice questions before I was ready to take a shower. "Dude, I gotta jump in the shower, think you could follow me over there?" I asked. He nodded, and followed me there. There were only a few more questions left, and as I finished answering them, I stepped out of the shower and started drying off.

"Where were we?" I asked. I had to admit, I was kinda curious about his body. I couldn't quite figure out why, but thoughts of it had begun to enter my head as I was in the shower. "What did it look like?" I had been wondering, picturing it in my mind. For a brief moment, I might've even pictured him in there with me.

"Don't worry, we finished all the questions. I'll grade it in the car," Leo answered.

He thought I meant the quiz, I guess. "No, I mean, we were talking about my body, and you mentioned how you're just a 'scrawny little nerd', but I bet you're selling yourself short," I said.

"Dude, look at me. your biceps are practically bigger than my head," he answered.

"Well then, if you insist, take your clothes off and let me get a look at you." A lot of guys and I on the team liked to evaluate each others' progress, and compare ourselves to each other. While obviously Leo was nowhere near my level, I was sure I could give him a decent assessment; it was the least I could do for the help he was giving me.

"Wai-what?" he stammered. Fuck. I'd done it again. I keep forgetting that Leo wasn't used to the way my teammates and I were comfortable with nudity and stuff.

"Oh...sorry if I made you uncomfortable, it's just, I can't assess you if you've still got your clothes on." And wearing a damn hoodie, it was pretty good at concealing any muscle the nerd might've been hiding. "If it makes you feel any better, it's not a big deal to me. Everyone on the team has seen each other naked." He didn't say anything. "If you don't want to, that's fine. But you did see me naked, so it's only fair." At that point I wasn't even asking for him, I was asking because I was curious what he looked like. Clearly my mind wasn't gonna let it go until I found out. I did have a bad habit of dwelling on questions I didn't have the answer too.

He started undressing. "And they say I'm the gay one." I laughed pretty hard at that one, I'll admit. When he was in just his socks and underwear, I looked him over. His body was surprisingly good; even had some abs showing.

"It's not bad, man! You could definitely build some muscle if you wanted to. you've even got a beginning to some abs there."

"Thanks," Leo said. He started blushing a bit.

"This favor isn't exactly free though," I said. "I'd like your professional opinion. As a gay dude. I mean, I'm never sure how much to work on my ass. What do you think?" My teammates generally avoided talking about our asses, and Sophie didn't really pay much attention to it; she was more focused on my frontside, and I couldn't really blame her, she didn't really have much reason to look at my backside, just my front. Afterall, that's where she's basically gotta look whenever we fuck.

"Of your ass?" he asked.

"Yeah, dude. You like it? Think it's too small?" I turned around and flexed my butt a bit for him.

"It's amazing! I'm not sure I've seen a better ass."

I laughed, but it was nice to get an honest opinion for once. And the positive review didn't hurt either. "Thanks, bro," I said as I continued drying off. I could still see him staring at it through the corner of my eye. He seemed really interested in it, and I decided to let him have a little more.

"You know, you can touch it. If you want. I don't mind."

"Are you sure?"

"Yeah man, I know it's kinda your thing, and you've been doing me a lot of favors today, so I don't mind letting you feel it up. Doesn't bother me."

Slowly, he moved near me and reached his and over. I decided to help him along, grabbed his hand and placed it on my butt. "Feel that muscle? The bouncy jiggle?" I said, letting him feel my smooth, muscled ass. I let go, and as Leo started groping my ass, I leaned my hands against the lockers. I could feel his hands against my skin; they felt different from Sophie's. Rougher, a little more abrasive. While Sophie's touch was softer and a bit more wiry, Leo's was more vigorous and playful, kneading like it was dough. My cock started to stiffen in front of me. Leo's hand moved to my hip, and he looked up at me. I nodded, and he reached around to grab my cock. He gripped it with the same vigor he used on my ass, and I moaned when he started jerking it around. When he added a second hand, it felt like my dick was being squeezed at every pleasure point. He didn't do it as timidly as Sophie did.

"Man, you guys are fucking lucky," I sighed quietly. "I wish women sucked dick half as much as I hear you guys do..." Leo giggled. I started breathing heavier as the new sensations overtook me. His touch was nearly gonna make me cum! I wasn't ready to be done yet though. I looked down at the nerd's face. It was lightly stubbled, and he had surprisingly nice lips. I decided to just go for it. "By the way, you ever suck a guy off?" I asked.

"yeah, I've got a bit of experience."

"Huh," I said, panting. "Don't be shy, bro, you can suck me if you want."

Leo chuckled. "Uh, are you sure?"

"Yeah." I turned around and leaned my back against the lockers. Leo moved his head towards my hard shaft, and his lips lightly surrounded my tip. His lips felt like velvet, as he bobbed up and down. As soon as his tongue touched my glans, I groaned loudly into the air. He took it as encouragement, sucking harder, swirling his tongue all over my girthy length, coating it in saliva.

"Holy shit," I gasped, as he slowly licked my member from base to top, teasing the sensitive underside. "Fuck man, that feels great!" I'd heard gay guys were good at sucking dick, but this? This was something else. I could barely control myself; it felt like his tongue knew exactly where to go, exactly where my pleasure points were.

"Fuuuuuck, you're good at this. So much better than Sophie." Leo didn't say anything, he just swirled his tongue around my cockhead, and then bit down lightly on it. That took me by surprise. "FUCK!" I gasped, trying not to buck at the sensation.

He sucked me off for like 10 minutes, and I was getting close. But I didn't want this to end yet. As hard as it was, I pulled him off. "Dude, sit over on the bench." He went over to the bench behind him, and sat down. I stood in front of him, my dick sticking out in front of Leo's face. He took it back in, sucking me like a lollipop. I looked down and watched the interactive show he was giving me. As he sucked me off, I noticed his underwear. He was hard. I shouldn't be surprised by that, I figured a gay guy might be turned on sucking cock. But, the bulge was...huge. I mean, I'd seen plenty of teammates naked before, but nothing like this. Was it even real?! He looked like he had the biggest fucking cock I'd ever seen. It stuck up well past his belly button, and it looked so wide, it took up most of the front space in his underwear.

"What? Holy fuck, dude!" I said in shock. Leo stopped sucking.

"What's wrong?" he asked.

"Nothing man, just...your cock is enormous!" He looked down at him self. "Fuck, you're huge!"

Leo smiled and went back to sucking me, more vigorously this time than before. I didn't think that was even possible, but he did it. "That feels so fucking awesome man," I whispered. His tongue was moving faster now; swirling around my pole, making it tingle and dance with delight.

"Good cause that's what it's supposed to feel like," he grinned. "Now close your eyes and relax." I did as he ordered, letting him bob up and down on my big shaft. I moaned louder and louder.

"Fuck, it feels like my dick is gonna explode..." I thought. And yet still, I couldn't take my eyes off the massive package below. I don't know why...I was just mesmerized by its size. I'd never seen one that big, and knowing it belonged to this nerdy, seemingly tame guy, who seemed to do things to me I couldn't explain...just set me off.

"You can touch it if you want," Leo said. He'd stopped sucking me. I looked down at it again. It was now or never. Slowly, I lowered my hand down and took hold of the tentpole through his underwear. It felt even thicker than it looked as I gently squeezed and stroked it. That made Leo moan, which made me even hornier. Even my big hand couldn't close around it entirely.

Leo started sucking me off again, and this time, he took my penis all the way to the base. I couldn't believe it! It was buried all the way down his throat. I could feel the vibrations of his moans, making me shudder and squeeze him harder. "Fuck yeah, nerd! Fuck, this is the BEST! Oh God...oh FUCK! How are you doing this? Holy shit..." I was in fucking heaven...wait, no, I don't think even Heaven has blowjobs this good.

"It just takes practice," he teased, flicking my dick with his tongue. I grunted, and Leo buried me all the way in his throat again. "OH MY GOD!! OH SHIT!!" I screamed. He fucked his throat on my dick so deep, I thought he would choke, but amazingly, he didn't.

I kept feeling up his own dick. I was done waiting; I wanted to see and feel this thing for myself. I stuck my hand down his underwear, and grabbed the fleshy shaft. This was the first time I'd touched a cock other than my own, but it felt good; surprisingly similar to mine, but much bigger. I played with it and groped it, feeling up the length of his manhood. "Holy fuck, holy motherfucking hell-" I said. "You're so fucking huge."

Getting sucked by Leo while touching his cock seemed to push me past the point of no return. Before I knew it, I was on the edge of orgasm. "OH FUCK NERD!! HERE IT COMES!!" I shouted, thrusting forward and grabbing his hair. My dick erupted into his mouth. I shot seemingly countless loads straight inside! I don't think I'd ever shot this jizz in my life, and I usually came a lot too. My cum flowed out and he swallowed it all nearly as fast.

Finally, my orgasm stopped, and I let go of his hair. He pulled back, panting. That felt fucking amazing. I'd never gotten a blowjob like that before. It wasn't just the blowjob though. Something about Leo...it got me hornier than I could admit. But I didn't let myself process what just happened; I was still staring at the massive bulge in his underpants. After getting my balls sucked dry by the best blowjob I'd ever had, I was wondering what it tasted like. Not just that; a part of me wanted to make him feel good, as good as he made me feel.

"Fuck it," I said, and I knelt down in front of Leo. I yanked his underwear down, and his big hard cock popped up. Seeing the nerd-shaft in it's full glory, throbbing and leaking precum, only made my dick harden again. It hadn't shrunk any since I felt it last, maybe growing slightly larger even. There was no doubt the hot little nerd had an impressive weapon tucked away there. My heart skipped a beat when I realized what I was about to do. "Fuck," I said, mesmerized as it swung in front of me. "You're bigger than the whole football team."

I grabbed it again and started stroking, beginning to lower my head towards it.

"Wait, what're you doing?!" Leo stopped me.

"Returning the favor." I started licking Leo's shaft from bottom to top, starting slow, taking my time tasting each inch of him, savoring his cock's flavor. He moaned softly, enjoying the attention. He gripped the bench, holding himself steady as I ran my tongue across his rigid meat. I tried copying what he'd done to me. I guess it was working, because Leo started moaning and sighing. For some reason, hearing those sounds made me hotter. More aroused. Hornier.

It pulsed on my tongue, letting out more precum each time it did. I was in the zone. "Jesus Christ! Dude, your cock tastes AMAZING!" I said, licking the precum off of it.

"Not bad for someone who's never sucked before," he replied. The dirty talk only made me suck harder, and I knew he liked it. Hell, I liked doing it. I wrapped both hands around his thick prick and began rubbing them along the sides, trying to milk whatever I could out of this monster. I licked down the shaft and sucked on his ballsack. Finally, I found the perfect spot: the slit at the tip, his massive pole's small opening that leaked precum like a fountain. That seemed to set him off, because next thing I knew he started bucking and thrusting upwards into my mouth. I looked up at him, then sunk my head down his shaft. It filled my mouth, coating it in precum. I sucked it like he sucked mine, alternating between slurping down every drop of his precum, and tonguing the tip until it spurts precum out onto my chin and forehead.

I think he was getting close now. "Give it to me, bro. Cum for me, Leo. I want your jizz," I said. I didn't even care that I said it, I just wanted it. The thick, veiny pole pulsed in my mouth like a heartbeat.

Leo kept thrusting into me. "Oh shit oh fuck here it comes!" he growled. Next thing I knew, blasts of warm, sticky liquid was flooding into my mouth like a tidal wave. Leo's shaft shot blast after blast directly down my throat. Every one of those shots felt like it was going to shoot right through me, but somehow, by some miracle, none escaped. If I weren't already on cloud nine, this probably would've sent me flying. But I really was floating on air. I'd sucked a cock for the first time and lived to tell about it! It was way better than I'd expected. Sophie complained about having to do it, and a lot of the guys on the team couldn't believe why someone would enjoy doing it. Truthfully, I didn't know the answer, I just knew that I liked sucking Leo's cock. I liked making him feel good like he did to me.

I drank as much of it down as I possibly could without choking or gagging on it. Eventually, he finished cumming and I pulled back, looking up at him with my face covered in the nerd's jizz. He stared down at me panting, but not saying anything.

by Lance Abrams

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