America's Top Ticklee

by TieMeEdgeMe

12 Mar 2024 510 readers Score 8.1 (4 votes) PDF Mobi ePub Txt


Simon and Edward went for a walk on a small trail in the woods behind the house.

"I'm really proud of you man. It's gonna suck when this is all over" Simon said.

"I'm sure we'll keep in touch. You can come out my way, to NY. Can show you the city. Would be a ton of fun" Edward replied.

Simon reached out to grab and hold Edward's hand as they continued to walk.

Edward blushed got a tingly feeling and smiled....however he slowly withdrew his hand.

"I'm sorry, is everything ok?" Simon asked.

"Yeah...I just think maybe we are doing this a but fast. In the end this is a competiton and only one of us can win. I just don't wanna be hurt....or hurt anyone" Edward said.

"No I totally get it, we can just be friends and allies here" Simon said, a bit embarrassed. He thought Edward was cute and really liked him but didn't wanna come off as to pushy.

Back at the house the other three guys chatted.

"Those two are getting closer. It's imperative that the 3 of us team up to take them out. We can be the final 3. I'm proposing an alliance where you work with us" Oliver said to Nathaniel.

"And how do I know you two won't backstab me?" Nathaniel asked.

"You're like...the strongest player here. We would never!" Oliver said.

"Mhmm...even more reason to get me out though" Nathaniel said.

"You have our word" Jake said with a smile.

"OK....deal" Nathaniel replied.

The guys were called down to the main hall for the next challenge.

"Welcome gentlemen. Todays challenge is the STILL challenge. Last time you guys were trying to be quiet. This time, its all about being still. You guys are each be laying flat. You can laugh as much as you like ut any moving or squirming of your body or limbs will have you eliminated. The last guy standing will get to chose the two guys up for elimination" Drew said.

The guys are layed down flat on separate, spread out mats.

The crew of guys from the tickle team entered, rubbing their hands, All taking their place near a guy.

"Ready GO!" Drew yelled.

The room quickly turned into a chorus of guys laughing, screaming, and begging.

"Ahhh hahaha please stop stop" Jake yelled as the tickler dug into his sides.

"Errrreahhhh!" Nate clenched his teeth and tried to prevent himself from yelling or screaming.

Jake couldn't take it anymore and grabbed the ticklers arms pushing them away and sliding off the mat.

"Ahhaha please please stop" Edward cried out. He was laying still as the tickler scraped his nails up and down his smooth soles.

"AH!"

Edward reflexively pulled his foot back when the tickler pulled a pinwheel out of his pocket and ran it down his sole.

Edward was bummed he was now eliminated.

The tickler near Simon lifted his shirt a bit and drilled his finger right into his belly button.

Simon screamed bloody murder and hopped up.

"Ahaha no idea I was even so bad in that spot" Simon said, embarrassed by his reaction.

Oliver layed on the mat laughing. He was doing better than he thought. He tried to stay stoic and not beg. He was pretty pissed Jake went out so quick, leaving it on him.

The tickler tried his soles, belly button, sides, and they a got good reactions from him but Oliver was not gonna let this break him. 

The tickler went for Oliver's pits. His fingers dancing deep in them.

"Ahahaha wait...wait wait" Oliver cried.

This was about to be the part that broke him.

Nathaniel couldn't take the sensations anymore as the tickler started on his soles.

He knew he had a deal with Oliver so he gave up and squirmed away from the tickler, just before Oliver himself broke.

"Congrats Oliver!" Drew yelled.

"Who is are the guy you will be putting in the elimination?" He asked.

"Hmmmm..." Oliver put his hand to his chin and began to think. He suddenly had his lips curl into a devilish smirk.

"I'm going to go with Nathaniel amd Simon"

Nate's mouth dropped open. He was livid.

"Alright men, you can go back to the house" Drew said.

Nathaniel began yelling at Oliver and Jake when they got back into the living quarters.

"You guys are backstabbers!"

"No I just need you to take out Simon, he is the strongest threat. I'm not threatened by Edward at all, he is a weakling. You are the best person here to take out Simon" Oliver said.

"Bullshit. You guys turned on me" Nathaniel fired back.

"I'm sorry you feel that way" Oliver said softly with a smile.

Nathaniel wanted to smack him.

Oliver saw it as a win win no matter who left. Simon was the target but also, Nathaniel was the strongest player and also a threat. He was happy to matter who left.

Nathaniel and Simon arrived for the competiton.

"First, let's spin the wheel of punishment" Drew said.

He gave the wheel a spin and it landed on a picture of the pie surrounded by paint and gunge.

The 2 guys were made to be hanging from high up. Each holding onto a bar. Below them, should they fall, were what looked like giant glass boxes with soft padding at the bottom. The walls of these 2 boxes were high up enough that you could not climb put on your own. Behind them on ladders one guy from the tickler team crew was positioned.

"OK guys, you just have to hold on this bar and not fall. The first guy to fall is eliminated and will also face today's punishment" Drew said.

"Ready GO!"

The ticklers began to dig into the guys sides and pits.

"Ahhhhahahhaha hahaha stop stop please" Simon yelled. He was flailing around trying not to lose his grip on the bar.

"Fuck...oh my gosh ahaha" Nathaniel cried out as the tickler dug into his sides and pits.

Nathaniel typically had better focus and stamina with than the other guys when it came to the tickling. His issue was he began to get sweaty trying to focus so hard on not squirming or having to intense a reaction.

Nathaniel's hands/fingers slowly began to slide because of this.

The tickler with Simon remembered his belly button from earlier. He drilled his finger in.

Simon screamed and let go with one hand to slap his hand away. Now he was suddenly dangling from the bar by one hand. Not good.

The tickler went back for it as Simon tried to use his one free hand to fight him off. It all became to much and he was about to fall.

Luckily, in that moment all of Nathaniel fingers slipped off the bar. He fell down into the glass box below onto the soft padding. He was trapped.

The tickler grabbed Simon before he fell and helped him down.

"Congrats Simon. You may re-enter the house"

Simon went back inside to embrace Edward.

"You had me worried sick man" Edward said.

The tickle team left and reappeared pulling carts full of pies, paint buckets full of paint, and gunge.

"Have fun boys" Drew said .

The guys speat the next hour or so standing on ladders and throwing pies, and dumping buckets down onto Nate.

Some of the gunge buckets wreaked. He couldn't imagine what some were filled with.

Some were filled with mud.

He didn't really have a lot of space to run or hide. He could only squirm and spin around as the glass box filled with every gross slimy substance imaginable.

Drew turned to one of the cameras:

"Who will be the next eliminated and fall victim of a kinky punishment? Find out next time on America's Top Ticklee!"


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