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by Gaz

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I fell asleep naked on my bed with Ethan. I didn't actually wake until the next morning, I woke with stale but nice smell. Ethan had let but before he left he placed the jock on my face and left a note saying.

"See you soon bro gone to see rents, back tomorrow as you will be busy later good luck with your choice."

I had no lectures that day so I spent the morning just relaxing on my bed after a shower and dressing in my work out gear, I didn't care about the frat I was excited to see my mystery god again but also felt guilty about Riley. I decided to meet this guy for all I knew I had blown all chance I had with Riley but I wasn't about to do anything I hadn't already.

As the day pressed on I started getting butterflies and apprehension as to what this prick at the frat may plan but I wasn't going to ruled by a mini Hitler, besides I wasn't a pledge or a brother. I done my washing and my special jock. It got to the evening before I turned my phone on expecting a whole load of abuse but just one text was on it reading.

"Be here or else. S"

Yeah fuck you buddy I have somewhere better to be I thought but I didn't reply however I made a mistake. I didn't look at the time on my phone but looked at the clock. I had forgot it was slow so I relaxed as it said 17:55. I lay down  closed my eyes and started to drift when my phone went off a text.

" where are you boi?"

I was a little confused until I noticed it was actually eight. I text back." Not coming, get over it." I jumped up and rushed out the room heading for the sweat room,I forgot to lock the room but it was OK we had in the past and nothing happened. As I was rushing to the gym my phone went off with a text.

" Big mistake boi, you will pay, I am coming for you."

I text back "seriously who the fuck you think you are? Jumped up nerd now leave me alone."  

I rushed in to the room and I couldn't see  my mystery man,  I rushed through the gym to the shower area but still nothing. I felt let down as I slowly walked back to my room . I opened the door it slammed behind me a hood was thrown over my head and I was jumped and packed into a large bag. I started to make a lot of noise very panicked and afraid, I knew where I was going but I wasn't going quietly or so I thought. I received three kicks one to the legs and two to the back. Not hard enough to hurt bad but I got the message. I started sweating when I felt myself being lifted as fear took over. My mind started playing tricks on me,and I started regretting the text message's. I was very apprehensive about what I had gotten myself in for, I didn't know how long we had traveled or how we got there. All of a sudden I dropped with a heavy thud. The pain shot through the back of my head. The zip was undone but the hood was only letting a little light through.

I was stripped naked placed on my knees hands cuffed behind my back. Something was strapped  to one of my ankle then my legs were forced apart and locked apart. It was the most exposed in my life. I heard a voice and guessed it was the guy in charge. He was reading through the texts we exchanged and I was gripped with fear.

" So brothers how should we treat the person who disrespected me, no our frat so bad?"

I gulped hard as the hood was ripped off my head, the light scorched my eyes, I then realized why I was so naked and exposed. My dick flew up as soon as my eyes adjusted. It was so hard it started to hurt. There were topless muscled jocks all around, I couldn't get my eyes to settle on one single lad. The room started to close in on me I could feel the tension and heat build in me. There in front of me stood a guy dark tonnes skin like he had just spent three weeks laying on a tropical beach and caught the best tan you ever seen. His bright ice blue eyes looked like they could extinguish a fire at a single glance,  his tonnes athletic body looked like it should be on display in an renaissance exhibition sculpted by Leonardo da Vinci himself, it was like this lad had personally picked where he wanted each muscle to fit on his body and he had got it spot on right. His hair was dirty blonde just about ear length swept at the front above his right eye. He exhumed confidence and had the entire room hanging on his every word. He turned and looked me in the eyes. My body frooze my balls and cock retreated so hard I thought they were going to dissapear into my body. My throat dried up like I had been in the sun all day without any drink.

"Bet you are regretting your choice now boi." It was a statement not a question. "I told you I would get you and when I did you would be severely punished."

"Yyyyou can't I ain't in this frat." I stammered.

"Did I say you could speak boi? You will address me as sir if I let you talk understand?"

"Which one of my classes are you the professor for then?" I shot back, I could feel Ethan's unwillingness to conform to rules rising in me. My comment raised a few chuckles from some of the brothers I even seen a smirk on my tormentors face,but it disappeared fast.

"Oh goodie, we have a wise guy it's going to be so much fun." He was looking around the room soaking in the spectacle then he snapped his head straight at me and the most evil grin appeared on his face it looked like it didn't belong to that face oor body.

"Breaking you down boi."

The comment sent shivers up my spine. "No smart are comment this time boi?"I should have shut up but the part of me that had a connection to Ethan was controlling my mouth and I fired.

" seems you got enough smart added comments for this entire room ma'am. " this time no giggles just high pitched whistles. If looks could kill I would be stone cold dead.

"How do you think your mouth is helping your situation here?" He asked quite calm.

"What can I say, I don't back down to bullies." I replied.

He knelt down in front of me leaned forward so his mouth was next to my ear and said."even when you are beat?" He hissed.

"Does this make you feel like a big man? Kidnapping a lad restraining him and intimidating him? Take away the cuffs let's see how it goes."

"I like your fight boi but this is more fun for me." He slammed his hand into my groin and grabbed my cock and balls in a vice like grip. I gasped hard the pain was both excruciating and exhilarating at the same time, I fought back cries.

"You enjoying my cock in your hand? Go on give it a suck, show these boys what you are really like." I whispered realizing speaking loud may not be the best thing.

"Hahaha you wish son I have played with guys,some in this very room." He leaned closer and dropped his tone lower "I will again but I am very much into girls, guys are just fun. Besides I have something much more fun in store for you son." He reached over with his other hand to my ass. This increased the pressure on my cock and balls. I breathed hard. He stroked my hole with his finger,this sent tingles through me I could feel my cock growing even though I was in pain it was starting to feel errotic I was his toy and he was taking great pleasure in showing me who was in charge.

At this point I would have given myself to him and I think he knew it. I loved Riley but this guy was pushing some button in me. He kept stroking my hole and it was getting harder not to show it completely. His middle finger rested on my opening and he pushed gently, I felt my hole start to part and I gasped hard. He stopped and whispered.

"Mmmmmm you are very tight, you know when it finally happens it is going to be very sore you have to be brave if you want it boi. Let the lucky lad take control if he loves you he will do it right."

This caught me off guard it sounded like he was giving me advice and being kind.

"What the fuck?" I whispered "you want to punish me and now your advising me?"

"Oh yeah" he had that grin again "well maybe we should rip your cherry right now."

My heart sank again as he stood up. "Brad you always wanted to fuck a virgin will a boy do?"

This hulk of a lad came through the crowd at least six foot five and pure muscle one of those lads even not cuffed if he wanted you he would take you.

"Sure thing Ste, I take him." He moved forward so I could see him fully, then he dropped his shorts and my jaw dropped. It was soft but easily 10 inches soft, thick with a few veins running down it to a big juicy mushroom shaped head. He looked down at me a smiled an evil smile. Panic was starting to take over me if this guy came near me I was in trouble,I was squirming uncomfortably now hoping this was going to happen. Brad spoke to the frat leader.

"How do you want me to give it to him?"

"Let's ask the boy's. All those who think he should be nice and gentle say yep now."

Nothing, not a sound.

"All those who thinks he should rip this disrespectful piece of shit apart with no lube say yep now." The room erupted there was whhooops, and cheers. Smiles everywhere. Brads dick started to grow.

"Looks like the frat has spoken. Brad rip him apart." Said my tormentor with a big grin on his face. Brad stepped up to my face and started rubbing his dick all over it, every second it was getting bigger and looked more angry. I knew it would be long. The leader took his trainers off.

"I haven't showered since before practice. I want to make this extra special for you. So while Brad here is going to rip your ass apart your face will be gagged and nose placed between my sock. Oh yeah and one more thing." He gave a quick glance to someone behind me, next I knew a piece of duck tape was over my mouth.

"Don't want the neighbours to hear you scream."

Brad's dick was now fully errect but just to rub salt into my wound my tormentor got a tape measure and run it next to Brad's dick.

"14.5 inches by 6 inches. Don't know about you bit I really don't want that anywhere near my ass. Brad if you would."

Brad disappeared behind me. My heart was racing I thought t was going to beat out of my chest. The main lad then stood in front of me, as I was tipped forward my nose went into the sides of his feet with one either side on !y nose. Strong fresh sweat smell filled me and my dick started to strain hard again. I loved this smell it turned me on and made me very horny. This lad was giving of a powerful musky sweat scent that was driving me wild. The down side of course was my hole was totally exposed and I was left very vulnerable to a mass assault heading my way. I felt Brad's beffy thighs either side of my legs,then he started rubbing his head up and down my hole. My breathing got deeper the smell taking over me I actually loved and feared this position. I felt a few jabs on my hole with his cock. Then it rested at the entrance and he started to apply pressure, not enough to penetrate me but enough to say I am coming in. I shook my head as best I could. A bit more pressure came and I could feel slight pain as my hole was starting to give way but still he wasn't in me.

"Enough Brad that will do buddy."  He knelt down and I was sat up again.

"We ain't into rape boi. You may not be in this frat yet but if you fuck with one of my boys, we will fuck with you. Next time it will be a whole lot easier if you come on your own accord. Now do you truly like my boi Riley?"

I knodded. "Do you want to please him?" Again I knodded. "Good boi.I would hate to think you were completely fucking with his head not just partly." He yanked the tape of my mouth, it hurt like a mother fucker.

"Now do you want to practice your oral skills on a variety of lads?"

I looked confused. He went on "do you want to suck more than just Riley and Ethan off? Yes I know about your brother."

"What about Edwin." I replied.

There was a very concerned look appeared on his face. "What about Edwin? Have you met him?"

"Yes Brandon brought him here to help."

My tormentor stood up "shit Shane, someone go find me Brandon. I want to know what he is playing at." There was some movement and a couple of lads left.

"Who is Shane?" I asked

"Doesn't matter. Back to you , know I have had a word with the boys here and we have agreed you can use whoever you like to practice anything you want. There are some rules though. No anal, no kissing and it will be one way you on them. Now we a re breaking rules here normally we would put you through the pledging semester but we have already done that this year, so I have decided to do it different with you because Riley is on of our best and will end up as president, vice or discipline master in this frat. Now you can chose who you want to play with we have all agreed. We will not treat you bad cause you didn't pledge yourself. I know some lads in this room may not be to your liking."

"I haven't seen one yet." I interrupted.

"What you mean?" He asked

" well you are fit in your own way and I doubt I would be disappointed by any of you." I felt myself blush.

He gave a stern knod and smiled. The cuffs came off my hand and ankles and I was helped to my feet by two strong athletic lads. They kept a hold of me until the feeling in my legs came back.

"OK good to see you are on board. Now this is how it will happen, I know your schedule so if you come here after class, you can choose who you play with out of anyone here. However iif you leave it late I will text you and given you twenty minutes to get here or I will choose for you and two lads to your room. I will let you know if I have chosen and even or you are at the door it will be too late,  you will go back to your room with the two I chose and practice there, is that understood?"

"Yes sir." I could hardly hide my excitement at the prospect of pleasuring an athletic frat.

"Steven but I prefer Ste." I looked at him confused.

"It's my name, that whole sir shit was just to show you not to muck us about when we are trying to help." He put his arm over my shoulder. "Know when would you like to start?"

"I don't know tomorrow?" I said unsure.

"If that's what you want" Ste had a disappointed look on his face. "Now." I quickly added. He smiled "who would you like?" I looked around the room, I was like a kid in a candy shop and my eyes found his and I fixed them there.

"Well?" He asked. I just gave him a fixed look, the penny dropped. "Me? Even after what I done to you tonight."

I replied " if I was you I would probably stare at my self in the mirror all day so yeah deffo."

"Ok , anyone else for tonight?"

"Yeah I think I need to give Brad ago, he did get hard with no release."

"OK " Ste said "Brad take him to your room I will join you once I find out what Brandon is playing at."

The comment made me wounded what had gone on between Edwin, Riley, Brandon and this Shane lad. Brad walked upto me, looked at me and gave me a warm smile.

"Looking forward to this boy." With that he scooped me up in a fireman's life and slapped my bare ass, playfully but hard enough. I kinda enjoyed it so I whispered.

"Do that again." Brad need no encouragement and slapped my ass a little harder. "You enjoy that? You kinky little sod." As he carried me out the room and up the stairs. We entered a two man room, the smell was sweat and deep heat like a locker room. This room ha everything in it, bid TV ,beer fridge two double beds ,PS4, and satalite it was a young mans dream. Brad sat me down on the bed and went over to the fridge.

"You want a beer? He asked. I looked at him " I thought. " he held up his hand

"We got plenty of time. Brandon better have a good excuse for bringing Edwin here after what happened with Shane."

This was bugging me now." Who is Shane? What happened? " I asked

"Not me mate, I can't tell you that's between Riley and. Edwin but let's just say they get on now but I took Riley a long time to get over it and it almost destroyed Edwin. Such an innocent mistake aswell., it was tragic. I hope Brandon knew what he was doing or he will be visiting Kyle later and not in a nice way either."

He handed me a beer so I pushed "who's Kyle then? I've heard his name a couple of times."

"You will meet him. He's cool, a lot of us like a little kink now and again and from your reaction to me slapping your ass I think you will visit his play room a lot. He is more than happy to provide extra fun, he's bisexual but leans more to girls, however he loves to spank lads but don't cross him, Ste or Jason. Kyle is the discipline master. He was doing laps after practice today as he injured a team mate at football practice and coaches policy is if you injure a team mate you suffer with 500 laps so he will be knackered now should be done soon as he is super fit, but even the fittest can't handle that. The coach does it to make sure we are very careful with each other. He didn't do it on porpoise but it saved your ass.'

" why?" I asked.

"Kyle has two settings. You ask him he will spank you so you enjoy it and he respects your limit's. Piss the frat off or break rules and he is an evil, viscous little fucker with no limits. That's what was in store for you tonight until the mistimed tackle the Ste had to come up with something new,so he decided to fuck with your head and get you freaked."

"He fucking managed it with your help and the one who knabbed me."

"Ah yes those three." He smiled. "I won't ruin the surprise, but they are Ste's hit squad they will get to anyone, even faculty."

"Jason?" I implied

"Vice of the frat. He's quite straight laced but has his moments, he has the calming effect. He is the reason I didn't fuck you. You really owe him."

"You would have raped me?"

"Hell no, Ste's right we don't do that shit but if it had gone for another ten minutes Ste is clever he would have gotten into your head and you would have begged me to do it."

"I do owe Jason then. That things a monster and I am still a virgin."

"We know and sorry for my part. Your ass is Riley's now, after Jason and Ste spoke this afternoon it was ruled off limits."

"Oh ok, so shall we get to it?" I said placing me beer down.

"Dude you really don't have to,I don't mind." Brad said

"Oh you presume I don't want to."

"But what about my size buddy?" He asked

"Have you spoken to Brandon recently?"

"No why?." He had a quizzical look on his face.

"I won't ruin the surprise." I winked.

He walked over to me, I could see the bulge in his shorts and started to wonder how I was going to tackle him. I thought what would my brother do. I chuckled he would proberbly pull the shorts down throw him on the bed and dive right on, I chuckled again. Decided that's the way I was going to handle him. I slipped my hands beneath his shorts and yanked them down and in one motion I grabbed his hips swung round while rising to my feet and spinning him round on to the bed with a thud I thought the bed would break. We heard some whhoooops from down stairs and a cry.

"Don't break him till we have a go Brad." We both giggled which relaxed me a bit and I thought just do what Ethan would do. Brad was hitched up on his elbows and was watching me with baited breath. I lined up over his 14.5 inches by 6 inches and prepared to drop,I was determined to go all the way so I opened my mouth as wide as I could and opened my throat as much as I could and dropped. His eyes opened wide as I got about 10 inches and stopped.

"Ohhhhhh fffffuuuuuucccckkkkkk ." no ones ever got that far.

"SSSSSSHHHHHIIIIIITTTTTTTT." He screamed as pushed myself forcing myself the extra four or so inches so my nose was buried in his pubes, he smelt great young sweat and a light hint of soap.

"Shit,shit,shit,shit." He was panting heavy.

"Hey everything OK in there ?" Came a voice from the other side of the door

"He's all the way on, he's all the way on my dick, HE'S ALL THE WAY ON MY FUUUUCCCKKKKKIIIIINNNNNGGGGGG DICK." He screamed as I withdrew and went down in a double motion again."

"No fucking way!  " the door flew open and there were a few faces just starring at us in disbelief as they seen Brad's monster had fully disappeared down my troat.

"NO FUUUCCKKING WAY." Came a comment from the door. Then the jungle drums started as we hear a few.

"He's fucking got it all." And "shit no way's." And various comments similar. With a few "I hope he picks me soon."

I started building up speed and pumping his monster faster and going further down each time.

"HHHOOOLLLLLLLLLLLYYYYY SSSSSSDHHHHHHIIIIITTTTTTTTT." He cried the first time I went the whole way first time I dropped in one then I started to pick up speed taking him in one, letting his head graze the back of my troat each time sending his body into deeper spasms each time. He hadn't felt this before and it was pretty obvious, 15 minutes after speeding up all the way his back was arched trying to fuck the extra in as he could into me. He grabbed a pillow and covered his face and screamed.

"I'M FUCKING COMING." The build up was quick but the out pour was plenty, as his warm seed flew up his cock deep in my throat. I held it there as pump after pump flew down my throat. When hen I felt him slowing I slowly moved up his shaft and let him fill my mouth with the last few pumps. He slumped down and was panting heavy. After about ten minutes his breath slowed. Still panting slightly he hitched up and looked at me.

"Some fucking surprise, shit dude Riley is one fucking lucky bastard. If you have no luck there I ain't gay but shit I will turn for that. Fuuuuccckkk." He stood up, we finished our beer's and to massive applause and "shit dude's" we made our way back to the frat common room. Just as Ste and a sheepish looking Brandon entered the room. I got dressed as my clothes were handed to me and quickly felt in my pocket to make sure the fresh washed jock was in there. To my relief it was.

"Did I miss anything ?" Ste asked.

"He took my entire cock and by the end was taking it all the way in one no gagging."

Ste's mouth dropped and he placed two finger over it.

"Shit really?"

Brad knodded and I even got a "I knew you were good but fuck that takes the biscuit." From Brandon.

Ste turned to me." I can't tonight but believe me after hearing that I will very soon. Feel free to pick a replacement and go for it again if you like."

I scanned the room and it seemed every lad looked eager. I was about to pick a young looking cute guy when the door opened and in almost staggering walk a lad with golden eyes with red flecks in them.

"Ah Kyle Brandon needs some attention." Ste said.

"I will play with him." I said pointing at an exhausted Kyle.

by Gaz

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