Love diz story had me rock hard till da end keep up da gud work im bi myself Houston got alot of sexy guys im more into a thug type like myself lol.......
Joe | 18 Jun 2009
OMG Your are a great writer, keep me spell-bound and horny the entire story. Keep up the great work.
jacob776 | 12 Feb 2009
the best written erotica story ive ever read. you should write novels
caleb | 22 Jul 2008
OMG that is the single HOTTEST fucking thing ive read on this sight...write a part 2 it would be amazing
elroy | 30 May 2008
omfg h-o-t it was hot but was well writen i love it you should write a gay novel and ill be the first to buy it
george15 | 14 Apr 2008
Wow. Wonderful development, good pace. Well done.
opus55 | 18 Feb 2008
Peter, Another good one! Your characters are beautifully, carefully etched into good, hot story lines. Keep 'em coming--pun intended!
Amish | 08 Feb 2008
Peter,
Where else other than at GayDemon do you have your stories posted on the web?
Under your name, "High School Wrestler" is the last story listed here. Now what?
Please write more stories (Frequently) or let me know where else is your writings posted after October 29, 2007.
Your talent is absolutely addictive!
You're an extremely well writer. One of the best I've ever read, if not the best!
Keep 'em coming, please. Thanks,
Amish.
enrique | 04 Aug 2007
Dear Peter You have created a gorgeous boy named Zack. Why not a story with Zack and a superactive and vicious coach (between 35 and 45 years old), both in coach's appartement an Zack, in the same night, have a intensive oral massage. With the coach's rugged hands kneading his muscled up body. Nippels sucked hard and tonge fucking his bubble butt. This is only one idea, then you can make more extensive this story, but please more action not pasive coach, cops, etc. Thanke you Enrique
enrique | 03 Aug 2007
This story is very nice but Zacks need a hungrily man and at the first night naked in bed this gorgeous boy need a good mouth massage an then a good fuccking season not a philosofic conversation. congratulations!
Guilford | 03 Aug 2007
Very well done. Strong & powerful, yet sensitive & caring. You are talented.
sunday | 03 Aug 2007
this is a fantastic story the best i have ever read i loved every part of it i wish my fantasy can come true.
Gustvo | 29 Aug 2011
Joe | 18 Jun 2009
jacob776 | 12 Feb 2009
caleb | 22 Jul 2008
elroy | 30 May 2008
george15 | 14 Apr 2008
opus55 | 18 Feb 2008
Amish | 08 Feb 2008
enrique | 04 Aug 2007
enrique | 03 Aug 2007
Guilford | 03 Aug 2007
sunday | 03 Aug 2007
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