John | 08 Apr 2012

I just want to focused on the story of Brad and Jason alone. It was somehow real events for me. A beautiful tragic story but now had gone different way.

I wish Jason had live. :'c

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Cain tenan | 06 Dec 2010

Dear sir.
This is an amazing story. I've found great enjoyment in reading it. Thank you for writing it.

Cain.

robert | 11 Oct 2010

that was so moving a story you can write up a storm

Will | 06 Sep 2010

One of the best stories ever written in gaydemon. This story broke my heart many times and made me wish that Jason and Brad would be together, somehow... I hope there will be part 4. Please do write part 4.

DAVID | 06 Jun 2010

I had to agree with those guys ..i mean it avery emotional story .. damn it man ,.. at part three i couldnt stop crying , espicialy when brad read his jasones last words :'( when he says " I Love you " .. God My tears couldnt stop flowing >> And I wish you contineu to part four .. you are so talented .. I swear this is the first story that touched me that much :(

David | 06 Jun 2010

Oh my GOoOd..
I mean realy ... I loved it ALOT >>>
YOU ARE SO TALENTED MAN ;)

roy | 05 Jun 2010

really nice story.couldn't help crying when reading the letter that jason left for brad.really wish he could have told him earlier how he loved him..aww well..still feeling a little damp but can't wait for chapter4 .

asianboy | 02 Jun 2010

love your story. but its quite sad.
when will u publish part 4 of the story?
Pls do continue with ur story. i find it very addictive.

Andrew | 21 May 2010

This Was A Sad Story. I Cryed That The End When Jason Died. And I Think His Brother Was A ASSHOLE. I Think You Should Write A Part 4 About His SON. I Love Your Story And I Read Them All The Time.

Sievers | 15 Feb 2010

First and foremost, I have NEVER felt the need to comment on someone's smutty stories -- but then again, this was much more than a simple jack-off tale. I started reading part one about three hours ago and have been so sucked into the whole story... I just don't even know what to say. I laughed, I came, and then I bawled my fucking eyes out! You are a fantastic writer and I urge you to keep it up! In short: great story, amazing characters and development, and a fantastically depressing twist... I'm still so teary-eyed, I think I need a hug. =D

tony5021 | 28 Aug 2009

I have read all three stories! And I CRIED my eyes out over jason.losing brian, I've read a lot of stories on the net, and have to admit it was the best story I have ever read. The author put so much thought into his writings!!! God Bless you peter!!! I give you 2 thumbs-uo!!!!! xoxoxo

criddifa | 08 Aug 2009

Okay, in the end i read the whole thing, i dont think u should right a part 4, beause it was the persfect ending, Of course Brad is going to get Jase, because he was a part of jason, and something brad wanted, as toby said, jason wasnt out there but this kid jase is and, i pretty much balled my eyes through the whole thing, but im glad i read it and still wished i hadnt, ur a great writer and i am glad thats how part 3 ended(or if thats the whole part, finished) i u do add on a part 4, im gonna let my mind wonder and think that brad ended up getting jase out of the orphanage and they are great friends just like Jason and Brad were, cause brad needs jason and jase is the closet things, great job and thanks, i hate u for writing a good book but love that wrote it, never reading that again, and i plan on telling my friends, so they can become emtional wrecks LOL CYA:D

criddifa | 08 Aug 2009

MOTHER FUCKER, i ruined it for myself.... i read that Jason had died and i couldnt read anymore so i skipped the end and i didnt understand it so i scrolled up the part where i read do u like jocks straps. i read on and balled my eyes out, but it was really good but im sorry to say, jason dying broke my heart and i cant/couldnt read any more, i know it horrible but i cant read any more on this story i broke out enough in tears through the book and the last thing topped it off to me, ur a great writer and keep writing, give us a similar story but with a happier ending like jason declaring his love for brad and him alive...... AWESOME JOB, i went through every emtional pain jason did through most of that book... thanks again... keep writing

etlog | 05 Jul 2009

undoubtedly one of the best love stories on this site. a marine called jason was entertaining to say the least. it was hot & sexy, it was comedy (who can forget the wet dream scene), and it was most definitely heartbreaking. above all it was about LOVE.

dare I say this but jason and brad should be on the big screen. what broke back mountain started a marine called jason would be worthy to follow in its footsteps.

JChung | 03 Jul 2009

This the most touching story i ever read. I cried like a baby when jason died. I hope a part 4 comes out.