John | 16 Jan 2010

Man you can be my master anytime.

jonnyboi | 28 Apr 2009

i have to say that this is the best thing i have read cant wait till you write more.

im a sub never had anyone tho but would love that to happen to me

dave | 17 Dec 2008

with the entry of the guys friends and then a big old country sheriff, not to mention the guard dogs, hmm a little doggie attention using our slave might have been in order. mmmm

Cock whore | 24 May 2008

What a lucky little bastard, what a god of a master. I do hope this happens to me some day. Even if I have to pay for it, it would be well worth it. And I would be only too glad to play ither role. Sub or Dom.

matthew | 24 Apr 2008

great story love it im a sub my self so your storie is like all my fanasys coming true

Robert | 06 Sep 2007

Would like to know where part 2 is for this story, first story was outstanding.

Sub | 06 Jul 2007

Wow, what a story! I'm a Sub myself and maybe thats why I love what you write.. the difference with fantasy or dreams like in your story is that its not too harsh, in real life maybe but whats the chances any of us would be as lucky as the sub in this story!??

Anyway dreams have always been so much more preferably to reality, atleast thats the experiance i have..

This story is exactly what I would "dream" about - it doesnt mean I would ever do it for real. But that's the beauty of dreams and erotica!

Please, please keep it coming!