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Comments by people who read the story Barte Thornton - The Beginning.

juan | 24 Dec 2009

What a tease! You set it all up, and then just backed away from it. I hope the next one is ... more nearly complete.

Joe | 15 Feb 2008

Great story and great ending. Keeps one excited.

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