Action | 09 Jul 2010

Sorry, I've seen this type of start before, and with a lot better HEAT. This is no better than a bland opening to the "promise" of a lot better. I'd have to see some ORIGINAL, INTERESTING, HOT,(did I mention HOT?)material to keep me reading, and I'd either warm this up or edit it to two or three paragraphs. Who cares about the details beyond the hot guy's looks and the old fart's interest?

Cocksucker | 13 Jun 2010

This story is HOT, where's the rest of it?

James | 28 Nov 2009

Please give us more! Would love to find out how Greg trains Adam to behave himself like a good little slave!

Master Wally | 23 May 2009

This story has great potential I hope that you will carry on with it,to tell us about how Greg goes about training adam to be a proper submisive sex slave, about how he is punished and humiliated

solar boy | 19 Nov 2008

sweet story \i hope you write more

Tony | 31 Mar 2008

I guess this is a chick revenge story. Can't say I found it in any way hot or sexy.

Susan | 09 Mar 2008

Great story! I want more.