justin | 16 Feb 2012

I thought it was good hard the whole time

Mark | 28 Jan 2012

I love it! I really hope you can make another one! :)

Andrew Fleisher | 25 Jan 2012

Sorry, I forgot to change the section in which the story was in.

Deandre | 24 Jan 2012

Cool story

Edward | 24 Jan 2012

The abduction aspect of the story was fun although I would have appreciated a more detailed description of the aliens and their equipment and I don't mean. llasers. A good fun concept none the less. Keep at IT.

major563 | 24 Jan 2012

this story should be in the sci fi section :)