This is a great story. I loved the plot and the wt you put all the action toward a great ending. I got boned up reading about the bar scene, but that's the whole point. Thanks.
charles | 16 Jun 2010
now! that was a story! had my attention from start to finish.great writing!
Mack | 30 Jun 2009
Great writing! Wonderful characters. I know people like this!
Dick Throb | 19 Nov 2011
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