Jack, you are an incredible writer/story teller. You have an amazing use of an erotic/sexual language that is so steaming and hot. I, like Ken and Dick, had a big hard on all the way through the story including dripping pre-cum and a big climax at the end. More stories please. :)
Ken | 02 Dec 2011
Once again, Jack, I got halfway through and came! Got to the end and came, again! Thanks. Rereading your stories gets me off, too!
Todd | 29 Nov 2011
Amazing story. I liked the slow pace and the hot action at the end. The twist at the end was also exciting. I'll definately read your other stories, thanks!!
dick | 28 Nov 2011
Great story, Jack. I've enjoyed reading all your "tails." I hope you continue to write more and more often. They're always good for a load or two or three.
Eric | 23 Jan 2012
Ken | 02 Dec 2011
Todd | 29 Nov 2011
dick | 28 Nov 2011
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