juan | 16 Sep 2011

Really nice story and cute characters--Wish you would clean up your punctuation so it would be a little easier to read!

Greg | 16 Sep 2011

Great story... but where is part 2 ??

Nicely lubed | 15 Sep 2011

Yeah wishing my 1st was that hotttt

Jeff | 15 Sep 2011

I really enjoyed, but what happen to part 2. The story just jumped and it can kind of confusing. In part 1 he was made at him then in part 3 they are having sex, where is part 2 were they make up?

curtis | 14 Sep 2011

this is so good please dont mess it up with a bunch of silly drama