v woodyard | 19 Mar 2011

There was very good character development in this story. I liked the interplay between Jethro and SEAN. The part about tHe "Sling". I didn't understand but, I don't know everything And assume it iS some sort of BONDAGe thing. This wAs A Long story and hard to read on a blackberry! You write well! Keep at it. And if possible, add in as many details as possible. It puts US in the story witH you! Cheers.