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Comments by people who read the story My 16th Birthday - How to Make Love to a Man.

aj | 23 Jul 2011

Hey mane btw luv all yo stories it seems like u tellin my lyf story lol n im only 18 lolz keep writin stories mane

david gonzales | 28 Feb 2011

Love to suck "cocks"and "swallow" cocks (SEMEN)

david gonzales | 28 Feb 2011

Loved this story.I wouldn't mine sucking on both of those cocks, myself.I just love the smell and taste of a guys cocks,warm (salty)"SEMEN"

NK | 28 Feb 2011

Hi All,

I thank you for your comments. Please know that your pov is respected. However, to really get a firm understanding of how I write, you may want to read the series before your comment.

Peace,
NK

jeff | 26 Feb 2011

it wasn't a horrible story, but it was odd. It has the potential to be good, but there are some adjustments that should be made. Some things seemed too repetitive, while other things you seemed to find the weirdest ways to describe like the "black candle". And the way the dad talked seemed mechanical...

HALER | 24 Feb 2011

WEIRD STORY

NK | 18 Feb 2011

Hi All:

Thanks for reading this installment. If you like this piece, then look up the series:

1. "How to Make Love to a Woman"
2. "Riding the Black Bus"
3. "Guro's-Teacher's-Pet"
4. "Tutor Me"
5. "Boy's 2 Men"
6. "How to Make Love to a Man"

Peace and Blessings,
-Nk

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