carl | 17 May 2010

The story was dumb. Spanking is hardly sufficient to bring the story to a true climax. One ends reading with the thought, "so what?"

Ted Lloyd | 18 Mar 2009

The story was good but it had a bad ending and was to short. I love father son stories a little more sexie

karl marx | 25 Jan 2009

Not bad, I think more bonding and closeness of father and son could be brought out as a result of Kevin squashing dad's ass; it's almost as if dad is passing on or bequeathing his manhood to his son and Kevin pounding dad's rear end is an outward sign. I would add that dad started to spoil and dote on his son--they went on hunting/fishing trips together and Kevin sometimes felt free to give dad a good friendly swat on the ass as dad put his arm around him as they walk back to camp through the woods.