Comments by people who read the story Naughty Nick..
Kyle | 16 Dec 2010
amazing! keep writing please!
Steve | 15 Dec 2010
Very good story for your first time. Can't wait to read more. Make some corrections to your grammar and capitalizations though to improve your story telling. Nice job.
mc | 15 Dec 2010
So far so good if this had lasted a little longer i would have lost it ;-)
Kyle | 16 Dec 2010
Steve | 15 Dec 2010
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