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Rob Williams | 16 Nov 2010

This is Rob, the author. Thanks for your suggestion, vt. It's extremely helpful. I never really know how much sex and how much background readers prefer.

I assume that readers turn to Gay Demon for sex, as hard-core as possible, so I try to match the pictures and the blogs with words so they won't get bored. It's a bit like the old Hollywood maxim ... give them at least one car chase per episode.

But I enjoy writing stuff like the bonding between Randy and Pablo in this chapter and I would love to expand the guys' lives with more background color. So I'll take you up on your suggestion and do that. I just hope I don't bore sex-hungry readers silly.

btw .... guys call me either Rob, Bob or Robert

Thanks again .... Rob

vt | 15 Nov 2010

hey rob.... i've been reading ur stories from the very beginning...

they are really very good but dont you think you should write something about their daily life..just sex and sex makes it very monotonous...

and thats where this series is getting, put something related to their family and stuff... they cant just have only five humans in their lives...
but nevertheless it is one of the best piece of literature i've ever read..
btw are you bob>>>????
rob>>bob???????

Kub | 14 Nov 2010

Still hating Mark, usual rant about that, et cetera, et cetera...
Pablo? Randy's son? I could see that. I loved their bonding in this installment. Other than that, not much to say, really. Which is mostly a good sign.

-Quicksilver (my true pup name)

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