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Kub | 02 Oct 2010

kinda funny note here: I live in CA and have a pool and poolhouse here. Another funny note: for some time now, I've been thinking about expanding it. Although, for me, I want to convert it into a dungeon of sorts :@)

Nice new installment, I'm loving the authority Randy's showing. Still not a big fan of Pablo, Mark, or Darius yet, but I'm getting more used to them. Liking Randy and Bob even more, even though I generally like bears more than straight-up musclemen. Plus, I love when kinky sex meets good writing quality instead of grammar that went through a blender.

All in all, good work, and I'll be waiting for the next installment

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