Steve | 19 Aug 2010

Looking forward to reading more of this story. Great writing. Thanks.

Nubian King | 15 Aug 2010

Excellent story, you definitely have revenues to explore for a sequel.

nudedave | 14 Aug 2010

Hi Nathan, nudedave here.

I found this story on Nifty.org, first, and like I told you, it's a great work of fiction, that could be reality, in some cases.

Once again, you have out-done yourself.

I have read all the stories you have written, so far, and am lookig for more, when your ready.

You have a gift that can be groomed to perfection, with time and experience.

Keep up the great writing.

your nude friend :-)

nudedave

paul | 14 Aug 2010

I look forward to a second part.

cris. | 14 Aug 2010

wow' that was a really nice&kind thing for kyle to do, ihope theres more.

NiceGUY | 12 Aug 2010

Nice st0ry..hope there's a sequel to this one..