Parker | 03 Apr 2011

Unfortunately for the story, it's too loaded with negative stereotypes to be much fun.

missannsboy | 09 Mar 2011

The main problem I have with most stories of this type is the authors rely so much on both; stereotype and cliche.'

How likely really that this white boy would've been, "captured" by this (militia?) consisting ONLY of the finest tuned bodies, everyone tall and muscular....and OF COURSE possessing immense,rock-hard,"donkey" dicks which never go soft and shoot, "buckets" of cum?!
Even finding such people, the presumption always is, that OF COURSE they'd go into immediate frenzy at the site/prospect of raping a white boy, someone in all ways, their DIRECT opposite!!

The idea being that NO Black man could possibly resist a piece of white (most usually pasty-colored, flat) white "ass!"

The African is at the sight of this white body, compelled to release his "TRUE" animal self!

The height of patriarchal arrogance assuming a kind of imperious dominance so strong, that even in midst of whatever skirmish (why else are these military types out and about in the areas) they would, to a man, literally HAVE to devote complete and undivided attention to raping a white boy into ultimate ecstasy!!!

The white boy's utmost fantasy, since first laying eyes on an African man!!!!

Eliot | 13 Feb 2011

very monotonous and highly predictable

Eddie | 11 Jan 2011

just shoot a big load, wish I had those big black cocks shooting loads of black spunk into me, more stories please.

merlin | 12 Dec 2010

Damn near 2ft of cock at the end hot...How many bbcs did he take ...

Meatlover | 03 Nov 2010

I would love to be fucked by that much cock.

bcl | 26 Jun 2010

I just have to read this story again and again.

I want to be fucked by all those black african cocks.

bcl | 19 Jun 2010

I love this story. I love black cock.

udontneed2no | 11 Jun 2010

Wow and i thoight i thoight dirty wew

COCKSUCKERSLUT | 19 Mar 2010

I CAN NOT GET THRU THIS STORY WITOUT CUMMMING !

Larry | 23 Feb 2010

I would love to take on about three of those big cocked black guys with about 9 or 10 inches - one after the other. And they would not have to be from africa, how about the good ole USA. I am just burning up to be fucked long and hard. I need dick now!

madman | 06 Jan 2010

i just love havin a gut full of multiple black spunk

alva | 20 Dec 2009

where should i purchase my ticket to africa for some of this action(pjvanguard@hotmail.com

James | 03 Dec 2009

I've been in Africa a few times, and those boys really are HOT with their camo's and bare chests, but I never did get one who was into licking cum and sucking dick - they only want you to do it to them, and then give you a butt full! Sorry to be a bti of a downer, but I lovd the story idea, just thouht it turned out a bit unrealistic, which spoiled it for me. But, thanks for writing it anyway!!!

joe lilley | 04 Nov 2009

Awesome story, makes me wish I was on the receiving end of those big black cocks