Chris | 22 Jun 2011

Very hot story. Loved it and can't wait for Chapters 2 thru ......
Keep up the great writing as all your stories are great.

Will | 10 Aug 2010

Great story, great story telling. PART 2! PART 2!

Brock Archer | 09 Aug 2010

It's really nice to read a story that is literate as well as hot.

Steven | 31 Jul 2010

Nice job Grant! You put such passion into your work!

KC | 31 Jul 2010

this story was amazingly hot.... you gave me one hell of a cumshot lol

Mike | 30 Jul 2010

Great story! I hope you continue this as a series. It would be so hot for Xavier and Lucas to get together! And to have is own bro eventually teach him how great it feels to have a cock deep inside of you.

Houston | 30 Jul 2010

Loved it, the whole Aussie thing did me in; twice

paul | 30 Jul 2010

brill story, wheres the next or continue from this one pls?

rayu | 30 Jul 2010

that was a hot story.ived cum two times while ill reading this story,good job n more power.