luverboi | 01 Jun 2011

I hope you guys have read part 2, part 3 is coming soon, hope u enjoy it!!

Jacup | 31 Jan 2011

I don't leave comments very often, haven't in a couple months, they never require much. lol
This story is very descriptive. Paints such a happy dark scene in my head.
I can't wait for the second one to come out!

juan | 31 Jan 2011

A very good beginning! To yup: This is a gay porn site--and there's nothing wrong with "just sex"--the quality is all in the descriptions!

omtz | 09 Jul 2010

Awesome story..... You are way better that most of the guys here i also live in texas and if you want a fwnd email me 2009obi@live.com

luverboi | 14 Jun 2010

This isn't a true story but I want it to have real feel to it. And I will not relinquish my secrets to part two lol xD

yup | 12 Jun 2010

you're a good writer, alot better than some of the old guys here with stories that are just sex. is this a true story btw?

Aki-chan | 12 Jun 2010

I really like this story..really wanna know what will the 2nd part tell me..

ANDREW | 11 Jun 2010

I LOVE THE STORY. CAN NOT WAIT FOR PART 2. LOV IT

*silentperson* | 11 Jun 2010

U r a very great wrighter and this is better than others because u can actuall see it goin some where email me would like to no more bout u ;) dustinsorrells96@yahoo.com