Phil | 20 Feb 2010

Very poor Spelling and Grammar. Spoilt a potentially good story. Shame!

Paul | 17 Feb 2010

Possibly readable, but illegible.

Alexander | 17 Feb 2010

Can anyone tell me the language in which this story is written? From what I gather of it (a word here and one there) it may be a fairly nice tale. I only wish I could get Google to translate it into one of the languages I understand. Ah well. One less book sold, I suppose.

Steve | 16 Feb 2010

It would be a better story if your grammar and spelling were not so atrocious. What is "naken"? Do you mean "naked"?