blake | 20 Mar 2012

great story.please have more.a real turn on.

soulgazer | 13 Feb 2010

just to let you know i posted part 2 but accidentaly posted it under the athletes catagory

Michael | 08 Feb 2010

Great Story keep up the good work

soulfeeder | 06 Feb 2010

I loved your story and can't wait for more. Keep it coming.

dj | 06 Feb 2010

great story so far cant wait to hear more

seanyguy | 05 Feb 2010

great story

Chris | 05 Feb 2010

Very well done. I can't wait for more of the story.

Soulgazer | 05 Feb 2010

Hey I'd love to hear what you think of my story so far comment or email me

Jasper55746@yahoo.com