James W. | 18 May 2010

Very fuckin hot, I'd love to know what happens next. Loved the piss in the hole. Agreed, could prolong the sex scenes but love the setup.

James | 28 Nov 2009

I liked the ida of this story very much, although personally I would like to have a bit more detail of the feelings and actions during the sex scene. Writers often build up the expectation and then somewhat hurry the sex. They don;t need to get off fast when they have a hunk tied up at their mercy! Anyway, I hope there's another Chapter. and look forward to reading it!