Nice story, but hard to read. Break up your paragraphs and add some dialogue.
James | 03 Mar 2011
Nice story, but hard to read. Break up your paragraphs and add some dialogue.
knobup | 12 Feb 2011
A fair story but a bit too short
Tony | 16 Aug 2010
Omg this reminds me of me n my brother.....great story would luv more
Wade | 08 Nov 2009
Can Not Wait To Hear What Happens to These 2 Brothers
Mark | 07 Nov 2009
I don't know where, but I have read this EXACT story before. What's funny, is that, if memory serves me correct, it was about 8-10 years ago.
Is was the bags of sperm and the "get you" that confirmed it for me.
Thanks for reposting this story...thanks for the memories.
ken | 07 Nov 2009
Man oh man, did i ever get a raging boner from reading this, it was awesome, damn, would have loved being in the middle of that myself, thanks for a great story, hope there is more to cum, oops! sorry, come. hehe.
James | 03 Mar 2011
James | 03 Mar 2011
knobup | 12 Feb 2011
Tony | 16 Aug 2010
Wade | 08 Nov 2009
Mark | 07 Nov 2009
ken | 07 Nov 2009
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