Paul.p in uk | 11 Feb 2012

You got me i was there feeling the bodys and the fucking sex i was hard as steel and the climaxing frist time three time in an hour thank you and more please

pat | 21 Dec 2011

Loved the story!! Kept drawing me in more and more. Excellent job!!

Washies | 19 Dec 2011

As a gay male I find that story pure genius,well done dude!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

JESS | 25 Sep 2011

I LOVED THIS STORY IT MADE ME FALL IN LOVE SMILE AND CRY I REALLY HOPE OTHERS FIND LOVE LIKE THE LOVE IN THIS STORY PLEASE KEEP WRITING AND I WILL KEEP READING

Oliver | 01 Jun 2010

Wow' its really amazing story and i think it happens in real world. Bravo. Keep it up..shawn.

Skipper | 20 Nov 2009

I started this story with a wicked gleam in my eye and ended it with tears of compassion for fictional character's love for one another.
Good job, Shawn. I hope to find exactly that myself someday.

Lycan | 07 Sep 2009

Dude that was so beautiful! Like most of the others said, it started off way hot but the ending was so beautifully sad! Thanks so much for sharing your talent with us! Thank You!

paul | 02 Sep 2009

OK - third attempt at sending a comment. Both previous ones were 'lost in the mail' by gaydemon - maybe 'coz I'm using Firefox?
I think you write very well and deserve a 9. Thanks for sharing.

Shawn Couch | 02 Sep 2009

Thank you all for your wonderful comments. I too had tears in my eyes as I wrote. I love writing and I hope my future stories you will find to be just as good. But, after this one, I honestly don't know if I can repeat the same success.
Once again, thank you all
Shawn Couch

Paul | 01 Sep 2009

You have a great talent. A very heart warming story of love. Will be watching for more.

Paul | 01 Sep 2009

Second attempt. First one got lost in the mail, apparently. I think you have real talent. Keep polishing it. The star thing worked, this time - you're a definite 9. Thanks for sharing!

Sexxiazsmiley | 31 Aug 2009

wow not only did the sex have me horny az hell but the ending which expressed true and unconditional love opened my eyes to real love.... That ws the best story ive read on here.. Keep writing and ill deff keep reading....

Paul | 31 Aug 2009

Amazing story. You write very well. I wanted to give you a 9/10 rating, but the 'click the star system' did not work, neither in Firefox nor in Internet Explorer. Sorry. You most definitely deserve a 9.

Andy | 31 Aug 2009

That was a great story. I like that the fact that you gave closerure to beautiful erotic story unlike so many that make you wonder if the story will continue or not. Keep up the good stories nd hope to read more from you.

LutzU | 31 Aug 2009

It is One of the best Stories i've read here on gaydemon. Is is so sensitive but at the same time very erotic. I would like to read more stories from you.

Thank's