uripdz | 10 Mar 2011

Sentences begin with Capitol letter!
It is GRAMMAR not grammer.
but a good story

Sucker | 12 Aug 2009

Hot story but.....

1. The sentences are incomplete.

2. There are many grammer errors.

3. Proof read ur work before submitting it and correct the typos.

Do this and you'll have great hot stories.