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Comments by people who read the story Dark Sun- Part 1.
Mike | 08 Apr 2011
way to short
Roger | 02 Aug 2009
Please keep it coming but make the next chapter longer - Tx
Bill | 02 Aug 2009
Too short, where's the rest?
Smiggy | 31 Jul 2009
is that it ?
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