Zack | 21 Nov 2009

Wow! awesome... love how you have thickened the plot.... Alex's character has evolved greatly, love how you have added more dimension to his character it makes the story... beautiful and real.

looking4u | 06 Jul 2009

This one is a bit weird and it confuses me. I love the story a lot but this entry just confused the hell out of me. Alex's character in this installment is really weird I don't even know what to make of it. Anyway can't wait for the next one.

Intrigued Listener | 06 Jul 2009

umm...this one is a bit of a let down, but still very interesting. I don't know but to me it was too short and was missing more of something I don't know I just hope the next one is more of what I'm looking for.

hi | 05 Jul 2009

so sad but hope it turns out good
PS NICE STORY

hotty_boy | 04 Jul 2009

hey dude its weird u should elaborate abt the relationship of rafael n alex n whr z hugo! well it was quite intresting but dont forget hugo! wil wait 4 d nxt part! be quick!

Edwin | 03 Jul 2009

Omg what has Alex done to him self ....that's sad wow well I like that u brought back Hugo.... But let's see what u bring out in the other one I felt the story went by so fast lol but I liked it go into details tho about the story!

hotty_boy | 03 Jul 2009

dude... its weird! u didn't mention earliar tat rafael n alex r in a relationship! m a bit confuse for this part!