etlog | 22 Jun 2009

breathe. OMG... LOL... not sure if this was suppose to be comedy but it was.

sucker3587 | 22 Jun 2009

sorry to be so critical but your story had no reasoning to it--it doesn't make sense--no punctuation.. poor spelling and grammer didn't even read the entire thing. take writing lessons or give up==sorr to be sh honest

hotty_boy | 22 Jun 2009

I didn't understood ua story at all? sorry bt i think its senseless