Jay | 13 Sep 2009

I really like how that started. I hope you write more

Lutz | 28 Jun 2009

The story starts very interesting. I hope you will find the time and th courage to finish it - even if it gets a long one.

Fire | 19 Jun 2009

Hey Blake, ignore those idiots. They don't know what they're talking about. They should know that this is not a complete story from the "part one" in the title. I, for one, think that this is a great beginning to a great story. I am giving it a 5/5.

KayeDubb | 16 Jun 2009

Such rude comments. I, for one, think this is going to be a good series. I'm looking forward to reading it! Muah.

-KayeDubb (The Counselor Series)

Dudie | 16 Jun 2009

Simply good

don | 15 Jun 2009

really stupid. The story only gets started then cuts off. It's like getting the foreskin and no dick. WHERES THE REST!

Blake.x | 15 Jun 2009

Hey, listen dude. I did that for two reasons. One; I was kinda in a rush.

Two; that's the only place the first chapter could stop without being reeeeally long. So trust me, Chapter Two is a lot longer. :)

Blake.x

angry | 14 Jun 2009

what the fuck all this story is only about half a page i finshed reading it in 5 seconds (it took 2 extra because i could not belive any one would be such a little ass munch that they would just put that little of a tesser)