will | 21 May 2009

your stories are really good, but, please please please learn to spell!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

juicy balls. | 19 May 2009

You need to learn how to spell through and though properly, also your grammar's a little weak.

I've noticed this in most of your stories and writing as many as you do, I think you should improve it.

Apart from those two things I like your stories.