will | 16 Jan 2012

well what can I say, but that this is one of the best stories I have read. anyway, I read all eight parts to this story and would love to see more like it. cant wait for the rest.

Kevin Marcial | 22 Dec 2011

Loved the story and the theme so awesome.!!!

slowstroker | 27 Jun 2011

Great story! A good story is better than a picture in many cases and this was one of them! Hope to see more of your writing!!

Tnbear | 06 Apr 2011

Great story , sad for it to end I wanted more and Sam !

hungrybttm4 | 02 Apr 2011

GREAT STORIES!!!! Enjoyed all eight parts. Thanks for sharung and by doing so you have made me relive alot of my past, and oh what I blast I had. He loved me and I loved him, we had sex and grew to love having sex togther, and I grew to accepting his nightly pounding of what WAS my ass which now belong to him. He did tell me to go out and find someone my own age, and/or experiment with othere guys, but I told him NO, I wanted HIM, it wasn't just the sex it was having sex with HIM, Thanks....

Rany | 04 Mar 2011

All the 8 chapters were good. One thing to mark that your story has a pace and its not been slowed down by giving minute details. I really hate the giganormous sex-tales. Hope to read more from you.

Lthrcwby | 21 Nov 2010

WOW! What a story! Who'd have thought a father and son bonding that way! It's to bad nobody kept their boots on always naked. Keep writing Dude those 8 chapters were hot. The kidnapping made the story feel real.

Shane | 16 Jul 2010

I absolutley loved all 8 chapters. It was an absolute beautiful story. Just a tip though, if you have Microsoft Works Word Proccesor, or any thing of the sorts, use it first so that you can have your grammar and spelling right. But either way, it was beautiful! There was romance, lust, danger, and excitment through it all. I loved all of the twists and turns. Thanks for writing!

adrian | 17 Mar 2010

too much drama on the kidnapping I mean I just want to whip my dick out
and start jerking off but there's a kidnapping really?(;

b | 30 Oct 2009

that is the best storie i have read in a long time and in the last part i almost cryed keep writing and i will keep reading them

thank u

Brock Archer | 21 Mar 2009

Nice story, buddy. I think your technique is getting better all the time.