wow a magnificant story!!! my imagination ran wild... love the verbal aggression in the beginning... but would like for you to add more sound effects to the room to make it more realistic to me.... over all i great over the top 20 outta 10!!!
Jamie | 22 Aug 2009
Thank you. That was a brilliant story, beautifully told. It had all the effects I am sure you hoped it would.
yardy | 17 Jun 2009
Wonderful and well written story. I anticipated and stayed hard throughout...
Rudi | 09 Mar 2009
Very well written. Love the story!
allan gill | 27 Feb 2009
Beautiful story, Mr.Johnny Murdoc . Well written and FUCKING HOT!!!
Ice | 22 Oct 2009
Jamie | 22 Aug 2009
yardy | 17 Jun 2009
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