ray | 04 Aug 2009

fuck the spelling....send me that policeman to suck on and get fucked by

JS | 21 Feb 2009

Good story, but one suggestion: Spell check. Spelling mistakes take away from the quality and mood of a good story.

Bob | 20 Feb 2009

Hi Kpaul, loved your story and the way you put in to words. Keep up the fine work.