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Comments by people who read the story Garden Boy.
peter | 11 Feb 2009
The grammar sucks (not in a good way). I couldn't finish reading the piece.
Charles | 10 Feb 2009
This writer should go and learn simple english. I tried to enjoy the story but the vocabulary was a huge turn-off
Indigo | 09 Feb 2009
Nice concept, bad punctuation.
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