KayeDubb | 25 May 2009

I agree with some of the people below me; the story has some gramatical errors, but that's nothing to worry about. Good plot, just work on the development more. Looking forward to reading the next part! Muah.

-KayeDubb. ("The Counselor" Series)

Jim | 20 Feb 2009

Justin
The story, so far is good, but pay attention to your writing. Many errors, otherwise it is very enjoyable.

justin | 15 Feb 2009

steve, where are you from?

Kyle | 14 Feb 2009

Fuck man, its full of gramatical erors, but it was a nice story

antovan | 13 Feb 2009

nice story, cant wait for the next one!!

george | 10 Feb 2009

nice story, i loved it

rob | 10 Feb 2009

man i cant wait for part 2

Steve | 10 Feb 2009

Can't wait to the second part please give the sexual details, cuz am horny

Hotbear1209 | 09 Feb 2009

Wow... can't wait to read part two. Haven't even gotten to the juicy stuff yet and I am already turned on.

ed | 09 Feb 2009

yeah nice start, gud u not beating arund the bush.