Andrew | 25 Jan 2009

Write more, please. This is a great storyline. You are quite talented.

Kenwitty. | 21 Jan 2009

Wow, what a cliffhanger, hanging on with baited breath for the next part. Hurry, good story.

Jacko | 21 Jan 2009

I like the story. If u wont mind wud u email me d continuation of chapter 8. I realy want to find out what hapnd to ford and their love story of jeremy. Im lokng 4ward for 8. Gud luck bro and hav a gud day and succes