Hey hey! Nice start, was wondering if you've been reading Twilight or something there. The tension seemed like the scene in the classroom between Bella and Edwards...then there's the name "Cullen" and eventually the "sweet venom" hahaha. nice
Candy | 16 Jan 2009
Hot beginning. Keep writing
Tigger #2 | 16 Jan 2009
Very hot beginning, looking forward to the rest of the story.
razzamataz | 21 Jan 2009
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