tiny tim | 13 Mar 2012

i loved the 1st part and second part but where is the ending....

Danny528 | 06 Mar 2012

Tht was so amazing, you need to finish the story i came all over myself a licked it up im so horny

Daniel | 19 Feb 2012

Oh my god u made me cum all over myself pleas tell me luke is gay and you fucked ... I want to go to that hotel

Paul.p from the uk | 16 Feb 2012

Shit i just getting near to pumping a load and it aint finished would love to see dad getting fucked by the son and he gets to come over them both .

CHRIS YVES | 01 Feb 2012

wow!that was 1 hotstory it turned me on forsure waiting for the next move

honestylulz | 24 Dec 2011

Five stars. Too many god-mods.

honestylulz | 24 Dec 2011

Six stars. Too many god-mods.

hot314boy | 14 Dec 2011

I loved ur short novel and got very horny as I read, please finish the rest of the story and E-mail it to me for piblishing.

Andy Thomas | 27 May 2011

That is an amazing story! Good job.

knobup | 11 Feb 2011

Fuck! write the next part soon Fucking good story

fritz | 10 Oct 2010

Just when you had my dick reaching for the stars can't wait for the rest of the story.

samson (; | 21 Aug 2010

Ahhh! Luke! Your suppose to be at school!

bob Edwards | 08 Dec 2009

I love the story and am waiting to the next part.

mike | 13 Jan 2009

Just came across ths site now and read your story. It's really terrific - now hurry up and get on with it ! In the meantime I'll look at your others....Congratulations