Joy L Ferguson | 09 Aug 2009

Very well written, I hope to read the next segment. Also very sexy.

AJ | 06 Dec 2008

Great work, I've got to read the next chapter. What do they do? And the sex, it's awesome, I never expected this outcome to play out.

Charlie | 30 Nov 2008

Amazing story. Very hot. Can't wait for the next chapter!

StudMuffin | 28 Nov 2008

Great story, loved the previous chapters and this beats them both! Keep up the good work!

Schalk | 24 Nov 2008

Great stories by this author. Erotic and always looking forward to a next chapter. This storyline has cops and cocksukers-lol.

Schalk | 22 Nov 2008

Excellent erotic storyline--great writing. check out Brock's other stories also.

Mark | 21 Nov 2008

Well now there's a twist n a half! :-) can't wait for chapter 3. Could only imagine wha could happen! :-)

jeremy | 21 Nov 2008

i love the stories

Craig N Tillotson | 21 Nov 2008

I know how I'd like to see it progress, but please, keep going! You've hooked me.