Koplikot | 23 Jan 2010

Exactly, Brock Archer. This guy Jay benson is surely a fantastic one of a writer.He has selected an interesting story,narrate it beautifully and write aesthetically. Fazzi is so creepy and disgusting. He is trying to seduce his own son in law and wants grandkids too! Joseph really entertains in the role of seducing FBI under cover agent. Poor him, he is getting trapped himself in endless streams of lies and sabotages.I feel sorry for rich. But joseph getting seduced is really erotic, especially when the seducer is a filthy swine like fazzi!:-)

Brock Archer | 12 Nov 2008

God, I love this story. It is so refreshing to read a story that has an actual plot--and a novel one at that--as well as unique, interesting characters. Other writers should also take note: good grammar, spelling, and punctuation do matter!