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koplikot | 22 Jan 2010

Author certainly has a powerfull grip on narration. While the light part of serving in party, flirting with old men was cool,the romance , the dance of love and lust are strong and intense.Description of nude loving bodies dancing together is so romantic. But i think writer is bit harsh on his portrayal of old gay men,making them objects of slight contempt and disgust. Well thats a personal remark. Overall this particular episode is overwhelming, opening itself for new twists and whirls.

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