There's an historical inaccuracy at the start - during 1853 there was no 'king of England' we had Queen Victoria :-)
knobup | 13 Feb 2011
GOOD STORY. eNJOYED IT
mc | 06 Dec 2010
freekin wonderfull story kpaul u never disapoint and i have read nearly every thang u have writen ;-)
chris o brien | 05 Nov 2010
yes got me hard as a rock just imagining you both swimming naked in the sea, pity there was no native black cock to suckle on
Josh | 01 Oct 2009
this is some creative stuff you got
vivek | 06 Sep 2009
really very good imagination and description of the stiry which looked very real and exciting. on reading it, it made me mad why i was not there with those two man and if i had been there, group sex had increased the excitment of this story.
justin | 11 Sep 2008
God what a story, it could almost be a movie, how sexy and erotic, just the thought of it gets my juices flowing. Write some more Please.
Chris | 15 Nov 2011
knobup | 13 Feb 2011
mc | 06 Dec 2010
chris o brien | 05 Nov 2010
Josh | 01 Oct 2009
vivek | 06 Sep 2009
justin | 11 Sep 2008
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