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Comments by people who read the story Making the Team.
jacob | 09 Aug 2008
wow i love it it has that whole innocent love thing going on.
Harlan69 | 06 Aug 2008
I loved the slow sensuous way the author developed the story, taking the reader with him as he went. It was a delightful experience.
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